Girthy story with a Halloween mistaken identity theme

[frisky-leo]

I'm hoping to find some simple editing assistance (basic word flow, continuity, etc.) with a new story, involving a costumed mistaken identity that I've been stroking for a while. My previous editor has had life get busy, and understandably must limit extra work.

Quick generalization: a couple are meeting at a costume party but arriving at different times, each thinks they found the other, but mistakes were made.
There are three separate spicy scenes, which helps explain the engorged word count... ~52k. *gasp* Should I break it apart or keep it as one?

I have a bit of my writing here already, all stand-alone stories. Check them out to see my writing style if you're curious.
If anyone is interested in helping me with this new story, comment or pm.

Thanks

 

[TheLobster]

Should I break it apart or keep it as one?

Note that if you want to submit this work to the Halloween contest, you need to keep it as a single submission. Internal chapters are fine (and at 52k, frankly necessary) but it’s gotta be one Literotica story in the end.

 

[jsmiam]

Girthy?

And then spellcheck changed what I typed to Goethe, which sounds like an intriguing combination for a story.