Girls and their Games

[GoodBoy741]

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/5689

A new teacher starts at an all girl school. Being barely out of college, he's having trouble resisting the 18 year old students in his classes. He doesn't know that the horny girls have decided to play a game that takes advantage of their new teacher.

I hope you guys like it, I think this one could be a lot of fun.

 

[mememe621]

Looks great so far! I can't wait to read more.

 

[GoodBoy741]

Feel free to contribute!

 

[GoodBoy741]

More threads are up.

I decided to try linking the threads so that even if two threads show him talking to two different girls after his first class, both threads link to the same thread describing his second class. Is that a good idea? I could lead to confusion later on when those girls come back, because someone could read a thread with Danielle, then later be offered a thread where Amber wants to talk about an earlier conversation.

I'm thinking the thread titles could make this clearer by saying things like, "For those who picked "Follow Amber" earlier: Amber is back". That seems potentially confusing, though.

Any opinions on whether I should continue trying to link things like this?

 

[whizzper]

Linking like that is best if you have a plan and a set amount of characters. Take a look at Courtney & Jeremy for a (IMO) decent look at the linkage.

With this one it's okay to link within a storyline/timeline, but if you link between timelines and storylines it might be necessary to have a quick linking thread to clear things up.

 

[GoodBoy741]

Allright, I will try to keep that in mind and keep things clear.

By the way, I wrote a thread for third period, but you can write a different one if you like. I wrote mine so that he was ignoring every girl except one, so the option is open to put other girls in that class even thought they weren't mentioned in the thread. Or you can say that a completely different set of events happen, that's fine too.

 

[mememe621]

Linking like that is best if you have a plan and a set amount of characters. Take a look at Courtney & Jeremy for a (IMO) decent look at the linkage.

With this one it's okay to link within a storyline/timeline, but if you link between timelines and storylines it might be necessary to have a quick linking thread to clear things up.

Another way to do it is just cut and paste--put up the same thread in multiple storylines but make minor (or even major, for some threads) edits as needed to keep things flowing. I think by doing that you can get by with less planning ahead.

 

[GoodBoy741]

I'm not a fan of cut and paste. If I click on a different thread, I want to read a different thread. Minor differences actually annoy me, because they make me feel like I'm being forced to read through a bunch of stuff I've already read to find the stuff that changed.

 

[GoodBoy741]

I think I'm going to change my approach to linking in this story.

So far it's causing more problems than it is worth. I'm making it so that writers have to account for tons of different things that *might* have happened at that point in the story, depending on what path the reader took to get to where he is. This is only going to get worse. Since I don't have a plan for where the story is going, I think this is going to get worse instead of better.

So I'm thinking that I'll make some threads that finish up the first day, then the second day will start be a field trip that the main character, the teacher, is recruited into going on. That gets rid of the problem of having three different versions of the same period and would allow a lot more freedom, I think. I wouldn't link stuff together nearly as much that way, the writers could more easily keep track of what's gone before.

Any thoughts?