girl running for the bus

[sirhugs]

where do Story Ideas come from? Images sometimes. My office window overlooks a main bus transfer spot. We get a nice parade of gals running to catch the bus. Some prefer the frontal view of well endowed ladies. Others prefer a rear view of a sporty tight butt. Either way, it is a great view.

I'm not sure how it grows into a story, but there's a seed. Who has some fertilizer?

 

[herecomestherain]

It's late, so quickly...

She has to catch that particular bus because her lover is on it, they meet at lunch time, take a trip together and return to work everyday. Each day they sit at the back of the bus and kiss and pet, growing bolder everyday..perhaps by the time Friday comes they stay on the bus and go home to her/his place and finish what they started? Perhaps they are a married couple who like to play games. We don't find out they are married until the end?

Some of the key elements are the pressure to make it there on time everyday, the public nature of the bus, the tease and anticipation, planning what they may do the next day, the fact that the lovers need to go back to their workplaces each day and behave normally.

Another may be that she has to run for the bus to be on time somewhere, she has to meet her lover who hates for her to be late. Perhaps she gets into trouble for her tardiness.

Cheers 'rain

 

[sirhugs]

It's late, so quickly...

She has to catch that particular bus because her lover is on it, they meet at lunch time, take a trip together and return to work everyday. Each day they sit at the back of the bus and kiss and pet, growing bolder everyday..perhaps by the time Friday comes they stay on the bus and go home to her/his place and finish what they started? Perhaps they are a married couple who like to play games. We don't find out they are married until the end?

Some of the key elements are the pressure to make it there on time everyday, the public nature of the bus, the tease and anticipation, planning what they may do the next day, the fact that the lovers need to go back to their workplaces each day and behave normally.

Another may be that she has to run for the bus to be on time somewhere, she has to meet her lover who hates for her to be late. Perhaps she gets into trouble for her tardiness.

Cheers 'rain

nice plot...how about you write it?


*still leaves the voyeur variation open too *

 

[herecomestherain]

sirhugs, thanks for the initial idea and I may well have a go at writing it. It'll need to go on the pile though with four or five other works in progress I'd like to hear more about the voyeur variation. Sounds intriguing.

The other thought I had is the "she" is in love/lust with the bus driver they drive somewhere each day...and have to be back at a certain time etc, etc...time pressured sex with a risky public element?

Cheers 'rain

 

[sirhugs]

sirhugs, thanks for the initial idea and I may well have a go at writing it. It'll need to go on the pile though with four or five other works in progress I'd like to hear more about the voyeur variation. Sounds intriguing.

The other thought I had is the "she" is in love/lust with the bus driver they drive somewhere each day...and have to be back at a certain time etc, etc...time pressured sex with a risky public element?

Cheers 'rain

I like the bus driver twist..you could add that to the existing plot to extend the story, or do a chapter two!

I'm looking for others to work up the voyeur angle. Its where the idea came from...the cheap thrill I get in rl looking out the window...but no idea how to build it into a good story.

One possibility I guess would be the girl is so stinulating, the guy ( or woman?) starts touching themselves. A coworker enters their office....

Another might be yelling out the window at the PYT, who decides to shock the perv by coming up to see him/her....

 

[herecomestherain]

Oh lord now you've got me going on this...she works in the office, she's usuallu pretty quiet, everyday the co worker sees her come to life and dash out of the office at lunchtime to catch the bus, he likes to watch her run, when she gets back from her ride she always seems a little dishevelled and rosy cheeked, we could know about his musings about where she goes and what she does and his surprise when he learns the truth of how close the truth is to what he's been fantasing about while she's gone....agggh stop the bus...my head's about to pop!

Cheers 'rain

 

[sirhugs]

Oh lord now you've got me going on this...she works in the office, she's usuallu pretty quiet, everyday the co worker sees her come to life and dash out of the office at lunchtime to catch the bus, he likes to watch her run, when she gets back from her ride she always seems a little dishevelled and rosy cheeked, we could know about his musings about where she goes and what she does and his surprise when he learns the truth of how close the truth is to what he's been fantasing about while she's gone....agggh stop the bus...my head's about to pop!

Cheers 'rain

so is mine, but I think we're not talking about the same sort of head

 

[herecomestherain]

Do I resist or risk a shocking bus timetable pun about coming on time?

 

[NASCARaddicted]

what about this one:

Julia is like 18 to 20 years old. She is working out in the gym. After the gym, she is taking a shower, when she realizes that she is awful late. She has like 2 minutes to get dressed and run to the bus station.
If she misses this bus, she will have a big problem: It's the last one for this day. The next bus will come tomorrow morning. Her parents aren't at home, so she can't call them to be picked up. Also, for some reasons, she can't get a taxi (maybe she has no money, or maybe the taxi people are on strike). So she really has to catch this bus.

So, as I said, she just left the shower. When she looks at the watch, she is shocked, because she has like 2 minutes left. It's very warm outside, so she doesn't towel herself dry. She grabs all her stuff (except her dress) and throws it in her bag.

Right now, I am thinking about 2 different versions.

Ver.1 She is looking for her tanga. But then, she realizes that it's deep down in her bag, and she really hasn't the time to search it.

Ver.2 It's warm outside, and the dress covers everything, so she knows, she doesn't need to wear the tanga, she just throws it in her bag.

Then she runs out of the gym, to the bus station. (as an extra: since she is still half wet after the shower, the dress becomes a little bit transparent and is glued to her nude body. While she is running, there comes a small, cool breeze, so her nipples are getting hard and are clearly visible through the thin fabric)
While she is running, her dress goes up a little bit, showing her nude butt ....

And what about this: When she is at the bus station, the bus is not there, so she still has some time. So now, she grabs into her bag and pulls the tanga out. She is feeling kinda strange without underwear, so she wants to put it on.
She is standing there, with her tanga in her hand, but there is always someone near her, so she doesn't want to put it on. Of course some people see the tanga in her hand and become curious.
Especially one guy is very bold and pulls her dress up a little bit ...

 

[sirhugs]

Do I resist or risk a shocking bus timetable pun about coming on time?

they so seldom do, the shock that one is has her running....

 

[sirhugs]

recycling

spring has sprung, coats are tossed aside and lasses run to catch the bus again.

But other than watching, what happens?

 

[fogbank]

This thread cannot go any further without this image being posted:

http://www.lileks.com/institute/frahm/bus2.jpg

 

[sirhugs]

and what happens after she gets on?

 

[snooper]

and what happens after she gets on?

Well, obviously the driver has a job to do, so he does it. When she gets to her stop she gets off and goes home to watch TV. What else would you expect on a porn story ideas board?

 

[herecomestherain]

Oh I'd forgotten about the girl on the bus scenario -- still can't see myself writing it in the next 3 or 4 months...so many stories...I do so love that picture fogbank, gorgeous stuff.

 

[emap]

Going back to the running to catch her lover bit. Perhaps instead of just petting and kissing one day the bus is a little extra empty and she ends up sitting on him. The bouncing of the bus hides their actions from the driver, but there is a young man, (18-21 you sicko ) sitting close to them who can see and watches.

To add in that little extra she see's him watching her and she spreads her legs a bit more to let him see all of the action. Also opening her shirt a bit more to let him see her playing with a nipple.

 

[sirhugs]

Going back to the running to catch her lover bit. Perhaps instead of just petting and kissing one day the bus is a little extra empty and she ends up sitting on him. The bouncing of the bus hides their actions from the driver, but there is a young man, (18-21 you sicko ) sitting close to them who can see and watches.

To add in that little extra she see's him watching her and she spreads her legs a bit more to let him see all of the action. Also opening her shirt a bit more to let him see her playing with a nipple.

I like this very much.....

 

[emap]

Well thank you.

Feel free to run with it, I doubt I could manage to get a good description of it.

 

[sirhugs]

Well thank you.

Feel free to run with it, I doubt I could manage to get a good description of it.

I doubt I will try it.

any volunteers?

 

[emap]

Further thought's on the running for the bus.

Woman is running for the bus because her master ordered her to catch a bus, when on board to make advances toward any man on the bus and let him do whatever he wants to her.

Along similar lines, woman is desperately trying to catch bus because her master ordered her to be to this place by such and such a time. Now the interesting part, she doesn't catch bus, but being desperate to not let master down she lifts her skirt and thumbs a ride. A car stops and she runs to get in quick, only to find it's full of horny college guys.

Woman is trying to catch the bus to get away from 3 men trying to kidnap her. This can go two ways, she catches bus but doesn't have enough money, so begs for the money from everyone on the bus full of guys, desperate she promises to do anything for the money. I'm sure you can see where that is going. Other way, she doesn't catch bus, 3 guys catch her and drag her to some dirty dingy place. They then proceed to have their way with her.

For all you incest people. Woman is running to catch bus to catch her brother, sister, dad, mom, or any other relation you want to put in. They are heading to the airport to fly home or off on a vacation, but they forgot something. She reaches whoever in time, but the plane is boarding and she gets mistaken for a passenger and ushered on board. During the flight they get a bit drunk together, share some fantasies where one tells the other they have always fantasized about sleeping with the other. Being drunk they of course act out the fantasy, either on the plane, after landing or both.

last one. Woman is running to catch bus because her boss went to go pitch the newest idea to prospective clients, however he forgot something. She reaches the meeting just in time, but in her rush to reach him she forgot to straighten her clothes so her skirt is pulled up, her top is in dissaray or opened. Of course men being men they mistake her for a hooker, her boss asks her to go along with it because the company needs the business. So orgy in the meeting room ensues.

 

[herecomestherain]

Gosh...

Who'd have thought that buses could be sooo sexy?

 

[emap]

Well me, but I'm a little perverted.

 

[sirhugs]

Well me, but I'm a little perverted.

just a little?

 

[fogbank]

More Art Frahm busstop artwork:

http://www.lileks.com/institute/frahm/bluebus2.jpg

 

[emap]

Yes sir, just a little, you don't see me drooling over underage women now do you.

Darn that Art Frahm, he gave me another idea.

Woman is running for the bus, armload of groceries in one arm, her purse clutched tightly to the other. She reaches the bus gets on brething heavily, takes two steps, remembers her change, turns and her panties hit the floor. She bends over to grab at her panties, pulling her short dress up one of the other passengers gets an idea, and she is kept bent over. She willingly obliges him, then the next and the next.

I admit that is actually something of a fantasy of mine, not on the bus but the rest gets me frisky.