girl catching brother during masturbation

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what about this:

Carl is at home. He is all alone, his parents and his sister Lucy are far away since a few days. They visit their grandmother who lives more then 500 miles away. He was too busy to accompany them, so he will be alone until tomorrow evening.

He really enjoys it. He is all naked, all the time. And he can play his music as loud as he wants.

At one time, he is in his room. After reading some porn mags, he became really horny, so he just starts to masturbate. He doesn't have to be cautious, since he is all alone. But out of an old habit, he closes the door.

Right in the middle of the masturbation, he hears something (I forgot to mention, that he turned the music off, before he started to masturbate). It sounds as if someone walks up the wooden stairs very cautiously .... ? No, this couldn't be true, his mind was playing tricks on him.

Suddenly, he heard another sound, a short quiet "bang" on his door. Dammit. BURGLARS !!!
Instantly, Carl stopped to masturbate. He jumps of the bed and runs toward his door. (he doesn't care that he is naked, and that is dick is still erected). He will kick this burglars in the ass.

He rips the door open. But to his surprise, there is no burglar. Right in front of the door, there is his sister Lucy. She is on her knees, and it's obvious what she has done: She peeked through the keyhole. And since she is on her knees, her mouth is on the same height as his dick ....

Without hesitating, she grabs his dick and pulls it into her mouth. Of course, Carl is surprised, but getting a blowjob from his sister is just too much for him - he cums right into her mouth and her face.

Later, she explains him, that she came home earlier, because it was too boring.
So now, they have sex together, until their parents come home ....
 
Hi

Wee bit too sudden to be believable friend NASCAaddicted, best to maybe have the sister suspecting her brother of being a compulsive wanker in his room.

She's sure she hears his moans and grunts as he cumms his fat everytime, her room is next to his you see.

She's been a bit hot under the pants for her bro for a while anyway, you know that funny age when young teens want to get laid regular. It's crap in their town, no real handsome young guys about so she starts getting hot for bro.

He too is hot for sis, it's her he's wanking over in his room, pulling himself silly wishing to screw sis.

After this sort of build up, secret admiration like, then I think the scene you've described could be worked in easily.

Cheers friend pops...........:D
 
Re: Hi

pop_54 said:
Wee bit too sudden to be believable friend NASCAaddicted, best to maybe have the sister suspecting her brother of being a compulsive wanker in his room.

She's sure she hears his moans and grunts as he cumms his fat everytime, her room is next to his you see.

She's been a bit hot under the pants for her bro for a while anyway, you know that funny age when young teens want to get laid regular. It's crap in their town, no real handsome young guys about so she starts getting hot for bro.

He too is hot for sis, it's her he's wanking over in his room, pulling himself silly wishing to screw sis.

After this sort of build up, secret admiration like, then I think the scene you've described could be worked in easily.

Cheers friend pops...........:D

I kinda agree. The basic premise, though nopt novel, is nicely developed here, but build up would not only make the motivation more credible , the story would be hotter, thus better.
 
I think the same as Pop 54 and Sirhugs on this, if she has been watching him she would be thinking of him as a wanker, and I don't think that she would want his dick close to her mouth that quick
liT
:)
 
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