gimme some feedback!!

[emisweetie]

hi everyone, i'm a new writer, and i thought i could get some good advice from all you very experienced people. i've written 3 stories so far, "sympathy for the bitch", "Prison Works" and "I can't help cheating." All of them are currently pending, all will soon (i hope) be in the loving wives section.

Please let me know what you think of them, any advice would be really appreciated.
Thanks,
Emisweetie

 

[Guest]

JailBait, is that you with a new username?

 

[emisweetie]

not me!

sorry, that's not me!

 

[CharleyH]

It would help if you had a link once your stories are hopefully posted. In the meantime, it would help if there were a story.

And don't mind CV, it's the resident disease.