Ghost writer?

[AStropirate]

Had two ideas for writing story. i) a mother and daughter forced to pay father's debts through sex and a mind control story involving girls working in office. indeed, I wrote two and were rejected by literotica, with good reason, i'm sure. I wonder would anyone like to work on them? I would like to see them published. Claim them as your own if you want. I just want to see them published.

 

[DontJudgeMe]

What happens with the mind-controlled girls? Who controls them and how?
Tell us more.

 

[bronzeage]

You should contact a volunteer editor. Check in the editor's forum.

 

[AStropirate]

Basically, guy on vacation in India is given a magical device in gratitude for saving an old man's life. He tests it first, on the maid in the hotel, then his mother and nieghbour and finally on the office bully, a lesbian, hazing his office staff. He uses the device to destroy her by getting her involved in sexual acts and exposing them on film to his office colleaques and boss, leading to her humiliation and dismissal

 

[Sanichi]

The first idea has been done many times, I don't know what you might do to make it stand out, but the other sounds interesting, with an actual story to justify the sex.

What reasons were given (with the rejection notices) for your stories not being accepted? If it's a matter of grammar or writing style, or something to do with the content, an editor would be the way to go. I'll take a look if you PM me.

If you really feel you have not got the skills to shape the entire story, post a longer synopsis here, and see if anyone will take it up.

 

[winged_rose]

Are you still looking for an ediotr or someone to help with the writing? If so contact me!

 

[Sweet_Pea24]

Had two ideas for writing story. i) a mother and daughter forced to pay father's debts through sex and a mind control story involving girls working in office. indeed, I wrote two and were rejected by literotica, with good reason, i'm sure. I wonder would anyone like to work on them? I would like to see them published. Claim them as your own if you want. I just want to see them published.

I'm actually hoping mine gets rejected, the story is good I think but I made some technical mistakes in the writing I would like to correct before it actually gets published. To much receptiveness and to many run on sentences. I got a little ahead of myself by posting it so soon. It's a good idea to run a couple of paragraphs by the boards in addition to editors I'm thinking.

Maybe that's what happened with yours? Grammar errors or something like that maybe?

 

[DarkBee]

I'm actually hoping mine gets rejected, the story is good I think but I made some technical mistakes in the writing I would like to correct before it actually gets published. To much receptiveness and to many run on sentences. I got a little ahead of myself by posting it so soon. It's a good idea to run a couple of paragraphs by the boards in addition to editors I'm thinking.

Maybe that's what happened with yours? Grammar errors or something like that maybe?

You can resubmit your story, just let them know in the title (like so: Title of your story - EDITED).

 

[Sweet_Pea24]

You can resubmit your story, just let them know in the title (like so: Title of your story - EDITED).

Oh you can?...Cool! What about the private board. Does that mean no one will see the mistakes and be able to kill me in flames? lol

 

[DarkBee]

Oh you can?...Cool! What about the private board. Does that mean no one will see the mistakes and be able to kill me in flames? lol

I'm not sure what you mean, but here's the FAQ on everything you want to know about this site and its forum.