Getting the married woman at work

BlackSnake

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A guy thinks that one of the women that he works with is really hot.

She often comes to his office and rants about her husband. He listens, but doesn't often offer advise. She is comfortable him, and they sometimes joke about sex.

In a bold move, the guy tells the woman that if he was her husband that he would suck her pretty toes, just to show that he appreciates her.

The woman is flattered, but laughs it off.

Another time, the woman comes to his office complaining about how her feet hurt from walking around in heels all day. The man reaches down with one hand and slips one of her shoes off. He rubs her foot. She says that she could never get her husband to rub her feet. He rubs them both one at a time. When she leaves, she is feeling better.

Another hard day at work, the man tells the woman to give him both of her feet. It is towards the end of the day and the foot rub has relaxed her so much that she forgets the time and ends up going home late.

On a weekend, the man gets a call from the woman asking if he would like to join her for lunch. The woman has had a fight with her husband and leaves the house to get away. During the lunch, the woman says that she could really use another one of the man's great foot rubs. They are in public, so the man says that his place is close by. The woman hesitates, and then suggests that they take his car.

The man's appartment is neat, clean, and well decorated. There were no dishes in the sink and the air is fresh. The woman jokes that she should bring her husband over to see that a man can keep a nice place. The woman is impressed.

Just as they do at work, the woman complains about her life while the man rubs her feet. The woman nearly falls asleep. She asks the man why hadn't he tried to take advantage of her. The man replies that he believes that she probably is getting screwed with being satisfied. The woman finds his words true. The man then tells her to allow him to get her off, that way she wouldn't have any regrets. The woman agrees and the man gives her a great oral treatment, and then takes her back to her car.

Monday and the woman is still smiling. The woman says that she wasn't uptight about her husband not helping her around the house and leaving his things everywhere. At the end of the day, the woman asked the man would he give her another oral treatment. The man points out that her husband might become suspicious if she start coming home late everynight from work. The woman agrees, but finds that the man's foot rub has made her extremely horny.

When the woman get home, she masturbates in the shower thinking how good it felt when the man sucked and licked her cunt and pussy. Even as horny as she was, she refused her husband telling him that he won't get any until he started helping her around the house and thought about her needs over his.

At work, she tells the man how she finally took a stand with her husband. The man agrees, but warns her not to go too far, he told her that if she held out on her husband too often that he might start looking other places to get his needs met. After a good foot rub, the man decided to get her off once before she left for home.

When the woman got home, she saw that her husband had loaded the dishwasher, so that night she allowed her husband to roll on top of her and then roll off when he was done. She told her husband that she still needed a little more help than that and wouldn't get more until he did more.

At the end of the work day, the woman goes to the man's office for her daily foot rub, hoping that he would go down on her. Then man gave her a foot rub, but said that the woman should continue working to get her husband to do the things that she wants from him, and that the man's oral treatments would only interfer with it.

When the woman gets home, she finds that the husband has messed up the place and is sitting down drinking and watching TV. She is furious with her husband. She locks him out of their bedroom.

The next day at work, the woman complains about her husband. The man is eager to leave work and asks the woman if she would like to come over to his place and have dinner with him. The woman is still pissed off at her husband, so she agrees without thinking. The man cooks like chef. The woman is even more impressed by him. After dinner, they have drinks while the man rubs her feet. The man goes down on her until she feels that she can't possibly cum anymore, and then the man fucks her; long, hard, and continuously. The woman was in such a state that she could barely get herself together to go home.

When she got home, she found an even bigger mess, but she was too tired to argue with her husband over it. She locked him out of their bedroom again, but this time wondering why she hadn't left him.

After work the next day, she asked the man could she come to his place. The man made her realize that what they were doing was having an affair, and that she might want to think about it. The woman decided that the man was right and they what they were doing was wrong, so she went straight home.

The woman saw an even greater mess when she got home, and her husband was asleep on the sofa. Instead of waking him to argue, so cleans up the mess and goes to bed, still keeping her husband locked outside of their bedroom.

After work the next day, the woman told the man that she wanted to have an affair with him. The man said that he would love too, but warned her that he would seek to be satisfied too. The woman said that she understood.

The woman went home with the man. He cooked for her, made her a hot bath, while he cleaned the clothes that she wore. When she was done he shaved her legs, her arms, and shaped her pubic hair. He painted her finger and toe nails, and brushed her hair before taking her to his bed.

The man went down on the woman taking her to hights she never thought she could reach, and then he began to fuck her. He pounded her pussy nearly half the night before turning her over and taking her anally until she passed out.

The man was up early bringing her breakfast in bed. The woman was completely worn. The hot breakfast gave her a bit of strength, but she could barely walk from the soreness between her legs. After she showered, the man helped her dress and did her hair and makeup much better than she could have done herself.

At work, the woman got a call from her husband and she told him that she wouldn't be home until he was serious about doing his share and thinking about her. She told the man what she had told her husband, and the man took her shopping for lunch. The man bought stylish dresses and shoes for the woman.

After work, the man took the woman out to eat at an expensive place, to a nice movie, and then out for drinks before taking her back to his more. He rubbed, kisses, and sucked on her feet and toes before licking her pussy until she came. He then fucked her long and hard again making sure that he gave her asshole a good hard romping too.

The man treated the woman very well, looking after her every need and fucking her unconscious at night during the week. On the weekend, the man took her to do all the things she had complained about wanting to do when she was with her husband. He held her in his arms that night listening to her until she fell asleep.

The next morning, the man woke her by sucking on her breasts. He continued down once he knew that she was fully awake and made her cum. He then began fucking her. He pounded to brunch, and then pounded her until he had no more strength left.

(I'm thinking that the woman was getting what she wanted, but realized that she didn't feel needed.)

What ideas do you have for this? I think it's a good idea, but needs something
 
The woman eventually leaves her husband for her lover and then near the end of the story it's revealed that he had been working towards her leaving her husband for him from the first moment. For this to work and be kind of a surprise at the end you might want to tell the story completely from her perspective and reveal his motives and feelings only at the end.
 
The topic sounds like a situation I faced. That's as far as it went.

Seems like a lot of drama & buildup prior to sex. How about guy thinks married woman at work is hot. Everytime she walks by, he undresses her with his eyes. She senses his lustful thoughts. One night they are both working late & he flirts with her. After a few minutes of playful conversation & seduction, they sneak into a spare office & have amazing sex.
 
Lee Chambers said:
The woman eventually leaves her husband for her lover and then near the end of the story it's revealed that he had been working towards her leaving her husband for him from the first moment. For this to work and be kind of a surprise at the end you might want to tell the story completely from her perspective and reveal his motives and feelings only at the end.

I think it would be cool if it was the man's plan to steel the woman away from her husband. He learns what her likes and dislikes are from her complaints and being a good listener. The thing that is missing is what attracted the woman to her in the first place, and if and when did she figure out that her husband wasn't the man that she thought he was.

Additionally, the man should be thoughtful in the fact that if she leaves her husband for him, how would he prevent her from leaving him for another man.

The woman should see in the man's deeds the things that she want, not by him trying to convince her. The actions of the man.

I'd like to show that the man is taking care of the woman's needs. This is the man's desire.
 
BlackSnake said:
Additionally, the man should be thoughtful in the fact that if she leaves her husband for him, how would he prevent her from leaving him for another man.

This is the interesting thing to me, and it could go a lot of ways. I feel that the man, once he gets his "prize", would never be able to fully trust her and eventually lose interest or move on to someone else he could fully trust leaving the woman alone.
 
BlackSnake said:
I'd like to show that the man is taking care of the woman's needs. This is the man's desire.

Then you need to give the woman some traits that the man finds attractive, not just that she's really hot. If his desire is to care for her needs and not just to get her in the sack then you need to develop your male character some more and find out what it is that he wants in a woman and what he obviously sees in this woman in particular.
 
What he said. ;)

Also, you rather need to clarify one thing, how long she has been with the husband. There are two time phrames you can use for this, just married and didn't stay together before or have sex so she is just coming to know him in bed and at home. Or you can use been married ten years +, she just can't put up with his antics, or lack of antics in and out of bed any longer. :catroar:

Personally I think the second would be easier, since she has been with him so long he can trust that she won't move on to someone else since he had to really push and pry to get her to spread her legs for him. The just married one, really there is no telling if she will stay or move on to the next cock once things in the bedroom turn old hattish, which honestly doesn't actually take that long if all he does is cater to her needs.
 
Lee Chambers said:
Then you need to give the woman some traits that the man finds attractive, not just that she's really hot. If his desire is to care for her needs and not just to get her in the sack then you need to develop your male character some more and find out what it is that he wants in a woman and what he obviously sees in this woman in particular.


Or you need to find some other justification for the lover stealing the wife. Was it about her hotness and getting their collective rocks off? Was it the Forbidden Fruit mystique? Was there some history between the two men? Maybe the lover was a 98 pound weakling in high school and the husband was the Football Heeeero who turned into a zero? Maybe it was about ego at the heart of it. A friend of mine once said it's not about winning your lover, it's about making each other happy enough to make it to the "ever after" part.
 
The man has been looking for the right woman to be with. Listening to the woman, he finds that they are a good match. They are just talking, not necessarily to get together. The big issue is that she is married, and he struggles with that.

The woman thought that she could change her husband into the man that she wanted him to be, but found out years earlier that she had been wrong and is dealing with the choice of marrying him. She struggles with the issue of being a devorced woman.

The man struggles with his feelings of falling in love with the woman. He tries not to think of her, but he can't help thinking of her night and day.

The woman is constantly drawn to the man, because she is learning that he is how she wished her husband to be. She wants to make love to the man, but feels that he is not the kind of man who would mess around with a married woman.

Their attraction is obvious, but unspoken. If they speak of anything, it is their friendship.

How about just switching points of view to show the man and woman's feelings?
 
I think changing the points of view would be the best choice so that way the readers know that the feelings between the two of them are real and that one or the other isn't just out for a fling.
 
Changing the point of view is a rather double edged sword. The story me and blacky did together came out well, but many complained of not being able to follow it. :confused:

So Blacky if your going to do this changing views I think best to write it up in one perspective, then do it again in the others perspective instead of switching views every couple of paragraphs.
 
emap said:
Changing the point of view is a rather double edged sword. The story me and blacky did together came out well, but many complained of not being able to follow it. :confused:

So Blacky if your going to do this changing views I think best to write it up in one perspective, then do it again in the others perspective instead of switching views every couple of paragraphs.

I think it all comes down to how you transition. Nicole Jordan, a romance author who's work I recently fell in love with, does a really good job of switching perspectives between the male and female character in the story.

Then again maybe you can write the story twice and tell each one from one side of the relationship.
 
I'd suggest writing two seperate stories rather than doing the switching within the story. The internal POV switch is very hard to pull off well, and I haven't read any Lit writers who do it well enough to bother reading it. It's gotten so that I don't even bother to try to read them. As soon as it's apparent the author is attempting to switch, I go on to the next one.
 
Carnevil9 said:
I think you've pretty much written this one already!.....Carney
Name the characters, describe the places, put in some dialogue, and it sounds done to me.
 
snowy ciara said:
I'd suggest writing two seperate stories rather than doing the switching within the story. The internal POV switch is very hard to pull off well, and I haven't read any Lit writers who do it well enough to bother reading it. It's gotten so that I don't even bother to try to read them. As soon as it's apparent the author is attempting to switch, I go on to the next one.

Just like with changing the scene, adding spacing and making the reader aware who is speaking seem to work well
 
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