Getting off the Dancefloor.

[lovecrafter11]

I'm writing my first story at the moment and have hit a bit of a crossroads and would like some help deciding which way to take the story. It's a Aunt-Nephew story and they have both been dancing at a wedding. They can't really do much on the dance floor because they are on show in front of the relatives. How would I get them off the dance floor to somewhere more private.

At the point of the story they have talked about his aunt's tits and she can feel his erection pressing into her stomach. She is the more forward one and he is a little shy.

I can think of a couple of possible directions...

handjob on dancefloor - possibly difficult to write but hot
he gives aunt a lift home
they go in the toilets and have sex

Any help is appreciated.

 

[shiny5437]

Jizz in his pants?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4pXfHLUlZf4

 

[albertaboy]

A quick blowjob in the coat check room, then the story can continue after the wedding.

 

[baphemetis]

How would I get them off the dance floor to somewhere more private.

At the point of the story they have talked about his aunt's tits and she can feel his erection pressing into her stomach. She is the more forward one and he is a little shy.

Several good options present themselves:

1.) "My is it me, or is it getting awfully warm in here? Would you mind taking me outside for some fresh air?"

At first the nephew thinks he has blown it and she is politely trying to find an excuse to stop dancing, but she takes him for a walk, out of sight of the crowds to an old shed/the parking lot/the back alley ... whatever scenario you have in mind.

2.) "Did you know this club has a patio on the roof? It offers a lovely view."

The aunt takes him upstairs. She ignores the "roof patio closed" sign and unbolts the door. They head to the rooftop alone and out of sight.

3.) "Would you mind getting me another drink?"

The aunt doesn't know what to do. She's intrigued by her nephew's crush and he has grown into an attractive man, but she can't bring herself to do it, to betray her brother/sister's trust, to possibly destroy the family dynamics. She thinks up an excuse to end it (and she really could use a drink). One drink leads to another, judgment goes out the window *and* she's so tipsy she needs a ride home.

So now you've got the aunt alone in the car with the nephew. Her judgment is impaired as he walks her to the house. "Can I get a kiss good night?" A kiss turns into more than a friendly kiss, which turns into a grope... "I'd better get you inside."

This story practically writes itself!

4.) "Tommy (or Billy or whatever the nephew's name is), I think you need to go downstairs to the men's room and take care of that."

What a way to crush a boy's wet dream, but he obeys. He goes to the men's room and jerks off in the stall. The aunt is beside herself. That was the right thing to do wasn't it? Finally, she says "fuck it!" She appears in the stall as the nephew is jerking off. She gets to her knees and finishes him off with a blow job, swallowing every drop.

"What you need, Tommy, is a teacher."

Sounds like the beginning of a beautiful relationship.

 

[Boundlife]

Where is the reception? A lot are a hotel, then then a broken heel, spilled drink...

 

[lovecrafter11]

Thanks for all the idea's. I'm going with the cloakroom idea. I'll make this a multi part story because I like the way the characters are developing.

 

[nfrrdscnnr1]

where?

Where do they go after? Closets aren't much fun but if they are in a hotel or motel or BIG house, there may be options. We presume you did not plunk an aunt or you'd have the answer.