Getting Feedback

[luvmymilf]

I have to admit, I was thrilled to see that my very first story on Literotica was finally posted to day. I was doubly thrilled to see that the first feedback on it was very good. Unfortunately, I took another look later on, hoping for more comments. I got another comment, and I don't know if the second person to comment failed to read my story or really didn't like it. Of course, Mr. Anonymous gave me a 0% rating to go along with a paragraph voicing his complete disdain for not only this story, but for any future stories I may write.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=434416

Sheesh, I deliberately stayed away from Loving Wives, figuring the Exhibitionist & Voyeur category would be a little more lenient. Apparently I miscalculated. Oh well, I've got another chapter of this story in the works. I figure I'll post it just to piss him off.

If anyone else would care to give me some honest feedback, I'd appreciate it.

Thanks,

luvmymilf

 

[sr71plt]

Yep, if you're going to let mean reaction get you down, you might best either turn off the voting and/or comments or think twice before posting your stories. The site is very generous--you can just erase the comments you don't like or consider unfair (or for any reason you like).

 

[luvmymilf]

I'm not letting it get me down. It's just kind of surprising, that's all.

I really don't think he read it, as what he's railing about doesn't even take place in my story. I guess he was bored with complaining about the Loving Wives stories and decided to take aim at mine instead. It even sounds like he believes I was describing a real life event, when I stated at the top of the page that it's a work of fiction.

My next installment will feature my "wife" house sitting for a friend of hers. She'll be spending lots of time topless or naked by the in ground pool in the backyard. The neighbor will be spying on her, and we'll be spending a long weekend having plenty of sex in the open air.

Probably not the most original premise, but it should be a pretty good story.

luvmymilf

 

[sr71plt]

Wouldn't be all that surprising if you read in on the forum boards. None of this is an invention of the wheel. It's life on the story boards.

 

[luvmymilf]

LOL! I just got an anonymous e-mail from one of the Heavy Browed, Mouth Breathing contingent. Can you feel his rage?

Seriously, if these stories offend them so badly, why do they even bother reading them?

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W.T.F? That is some fucking dirty bitch/whore you have there. Your wimp of a hero thinks only for two seconds about sharing his wife with someone. Which means you an dyour wife are obviously fuckign swingers. What I don't understand is they had NEVER discussed it before. What sort of wimp are you writing about? Okay so the hero got to fuck his whore/bitch/slut wife with someone else. He better get used to it. After this little stunt she will never be just HIS wife anymore. Dog's, Horses, whatever takes her fancy is what she will fuck next. Watch ot for the blackmen with their 20 foot long and two foot wide pricks. They will egt her as well. Then of course you have her being bred and giving you a black baby to bring up. I hope they enjoy their new slut/bitch/whore lifestyle. Make sure in the next story that the kids know what the mother does. In fact get them to join in. The more the merrier. Thsi is a very nasty story or a wife with no respect for the one she claims to love. What a fucking joke? 'LOVE' don't make me laugh. Bitch/whore/cumsluts like her don't know how to 'LOVE' they think with their dirty nasty cunts just as men think with their pricks.

 

[CWatson]

Some people forget that Literotica is a site where writers explore fantasies.

Some people forget that Literotica is a site where writers explore their own fantasies.

Ignore them. When you produce a work of quality, the people who don't acknowledge it only do so because they're incapable of recognizing quality when they see it. Threesomes aren't my cup of tea, but did that mean your story isn't hot? Of course not. Did that mean your story isn't good? Of course not. Unless you're a judgmental moron who thinks that quality is affected by taste. And, unfortunately, Lit has its share of those.

In any case, congratulations on your first publication!

 

[sr71plt]

I'd chuckle at an e-mail like that--amused at the thought that they put so much time and energy into something I was going to barely skim, if even that.

 

[luvmymilf]

C,

Thanks so much for your help editing and other suggestions to improve this one. I've actually had one reader post a favorable comment, along with his name. I've also had three others add this as a favorite story. I've got another one in the works that features this same couple.

Edit: I've taken down what I wrote here yesterday.

 

[luvmymilf]

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Your head is so big I am surprised it fits through the door. Sarcasm is the worst form of wit. And you are really the worst person to write that stuff.

*DO NOT hit the REPLY button to respond to this email.*

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At least you, Mr Anonymous e-mailer, can spell. It disappoints me though, how you snipe at me through the veil of anonymity.

Which of my comments yesterday hit closest to home and hurt your feelings?

What's next, a threat of personal violence?

 

[sr71plt]

I think that's a canned comment. It sounds like one that's been posted here before.