Well, folks, here it is, "Get Busy", my final approved submission from the original 7 stories I submitted on the 8th of October. After a couple of rejections for formatting (the 2nd one seemed to be merely a glitch, because it was already fixed, or seemed to be), I'm happy to say it took only (counts quickly on fingers and toes, but runs out of digits and reaches for calculator)...um...twenty-three days for this story to get approved!
Not that I'm complaining, o'course. Anyway, here's the link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=332960
It's posted in the Humor & Satire category because it's a private-eye story spoof. For those of you who may think that the characters were cut off the back of a cereal box (god, I LOVE that analogy!), well, they were supposed to appear this way.
Enjoy, have a good read, don't forget to vote and leave public commentary!
Hogs & quiches,
Pete M'Gurk
Not that I'm complaining, o'course. Anyway, here's the link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=332960
It's posted in the Humor & Satire category because it's a private-eye story spoof. For those of you who may think that the characters were cut off the back of a cereal box (god, I LOVE that analogy!), well, they were supposed to appear this way.
Enjoy, have a good read, don't forget to vote and leave public commentary!
Hogs & quiches,
Pete M'Gurk
