Nightscream89
novice writer
- Joined
- Nov 11, 2024
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6th chapter of my story is out,
https://www.literotica.com/s/gc-ch-06-surprise
If anyone has feedback for me, I am very open to it.
It's my first erotica story, so no doubt I still have a lot to improve on.
Also one major question I have, I might want to include a bit of kinkier stuff in later chapter, for example Watersports.
Do you guys think it's alright to insert that into the story now? Or will that put the readers off since I haven't included it earlier?
https://www.literotica.com/s/gc-ch-06-surprise
If anyone has feedback for me, I am very open to it.
It's my first erotica story, so no doubt I still have a lot to improve on.
Also one major question I have, I might want to include a bit of kinkier stuff in later chapter, for example Watersports.
Do you guys think it's alright to insert that into the story now? Or will that put the readers off since I haven't included it earlier?