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HandsInTheDark
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My sex scenes bug me. They rate ok (or at least when I get negative comments it's never about the sex). But the writing of them gets slowed down by the fact that when my males start touching my females, the females have a limited palette of reactions. They'll shiver, their eyes might grow wide, they might whimper if they're finding it overwhelming, or moan if they've fully bought into what's going on. There might be a gasp or two.
I use bits of dialogue to slow down and break up the flow, so usually, I can get some distance between repeated verbs, but...
How do other writers deal with the fact that signs of arousal are pretty much predictable and repetitive? Because my male characters don't often want to rush into the actual penetration. They like ratcheting up the tension and anticipation. But it makes for a lot of female reactions before the main event starts, and I'm struggling to deal with the repetition.
I use bits of dialogue to slow down and break up the flow, so usually, I can get some distance between repeated verbs, but...
How do other writers deal with the fact that signs of arousal are pretty much predictable and repetitive? Because my male characters don't often want to rush into the actual penetration. They like ratcheting up the tension and anticipation. But it makes for a lot of female reactions before the main event starts, and I'm struggling to deal with the repetition.