Gangbang: a male perspective

[fogbank]

I know, there are thousands of gangbang stories out ther on Lit already. But every one of them that I've read focuses on the female perspective (or else is completely unfocused in perspective).

I think an interesting approach would be to focus on the guys--maybe a group of about five guys--they circle-jerked together when they were growing up, then they gradually got girlfriends, moved off to college, but kept in touch via email/chat. They talk about sex a lot, and gradually the idea comes up that they should do a gangbang. For a while it's just a joke, but a couple of them are really serious about it, and convince the others. Eventually, they up an ad on the Internet, and get a lot of responses, eventually deciding on one lucky woman. And while the woman shows up and hot, intense sex ensues, the male friends are really the focus of the story.

Or maybe it shouldn't be as deliberate as an ad on the Internet. That's the most realistic way, nowdays. But maybe it's just one woman, met in chance, who recognises the potential in the group. Thoughts?

 

[silverwhisper]

i prefer the old-fashioned way: it lets you explore the relationships as a writer a bit more i think as well as giving you an opportunity to get into each of the men's heads WRT why they think it's a good idea. by taking this more organic approach, i also think that you create more opportunities to just how the event comes about. :>

having read your first story, i think you'd handle this quite well and i'm very curious to see it.

ed

 

[fogbank]

if I write I story where there are occasional references to a circle-jerk that the guys had when they were younger, does that violate Lit's age rules?

 

[silverwhisper]

i'd imagine you're OK if it's abstract rather than explicit and don't actually specify they were minors at the time.

ed

 

[bisexplicit]

if I write I story where there are occasional references to a circle-jerk that the guys had when they were younger, does that violate Lit's age rules?

Make them like 30ish or something when the main part of the story takes place...thus if they did something when they were "younger" it could easily be over eighteen.

 

[emap]

What she said, and I am curious as to what goes through a guys head during, especially when he's not the one on top.

I have a feeling it's as simple as dang she looks good getting fucked but i'm not a guy so no idea really.

 

[fogbank]

So, let's say there's a group of five guys who have been friends since they were young. They're all a bit geeky, all around 30 years old. They decide to get together to see the new star wars movie, just as they went as a group to see it when they were young--a couple of the guys, who live in a different city, even fly in to see it with the group. And because one of guys' older sister had chapperoned them to see Return of the Jedi, they decide to invite her to see the film with them.
After the movie, they get to talking. The sister reveals how she was always envious of the private little group that the boys had, and how, when they were in their late teens, they were always going off and hanging out in their fort, playing D&D and reading comics. This observation causes some embarrassment, because the boys were not reading comics, they were looking at porn and circle-jerking. When one of the guys reveals that they hadn't been so innocent, the sister is shocked, and teases them mercilessly.
The next day, the guys get together to play board games, since they're all in town. One of the guys still has a chest containing all the old magazines, and decides to bring it in, just for a laugh. The sister shows up too, and when she realizes the contents of the case, teases them again. This time, a couple of the guys stand up for themselves, claiming that it wasn't really that inappropriate, and they weren't ashamed of their masturbatory past. The sister challenges them: if it wasn't inappropriate then, why not now? Once the guys start to get into it, they tell her to join in. She reluctantly agrees, and begins to masturbate as she watches them.

Things progress from there into the gangbang. I think it would be told in first-person perspective by one of the guys. I also think I'll make one of the guys gay--he never told his friends that he was masturbating about them rather than the girls in the magazine, but he reveals it now.

 

[emap]

Sounds good.

YOu know I've never actually had men playing with themselves in front of me, I've seen the stroking to keep it hard and such, but never a full blown stroking it. I'm going to have to see about getting someone to do that for me and not dive in.

 

[trainman69]

I like the idea

Having been a male in a few gangbangs, I like this idea. The ones I was part of were for the most part unplanned. The planning would be fun.. and the selection of the woman should be as an audition. She has to show up at a bar to meet 2-3 of the guys and convince them she is the one they would want to choose.

She needs to be eager and willing,,but not trailor trash either. I do like the idea that it will show the guys point of view.. shed a little light on how guys really talk and think in the locker room or shower.. about what they would like to do to some nubile lady..

ie...:"geez.. I would love to find a woman who liked to be faced FUCKED, and you just knew that she couldn't wait for you to fill her mouth full of cum.. and then watch her swallow it with a smile!!"

So how is the story line coming along?