Funny Story?

[Camilleon]

A friend of mine keeps telling me that I'm funny. I've decided to put his opinion to the test. So, if you are interested in my written experiment in humor, please see my story "Shit Happens!"

Of course, feedback is always desired and welcome.

Thank you in advance.



Oh yeah, and by the way, I'm starting a pressure washing service. So, if you need any pressure washing done...

 

[freshface]

The regulars here are a lazy lot. If you want feedback, you should include a link.

 

[Camilleon]

The regulars here are a lazy lot. If you want feedback, you should include a link.

It's right there at the bottom of my signature panel.

 

[freshface]

It's right there at the bottom of my signature panel.

But that only helps if you have sigs turned on.

 

[Camilleon]

But that only helps if you have sigs turned on.

I knew that....

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=374948

Thank you.

 

[freshface]

Oh, my. I really needed a good laugh. My cats are still looking at me like I've lost my mind.

The tone is perfect. "How hard can it be?" has new meaning for me now. I loved the build-up. You did a great job of introducing her as a normal person and gradually revealing that she's not at all normal. Her dog's reactions were a very nice touch. I really liked it, almost to the very end. I thought you were a little over the top when you got to the chainsaw portion. It sort of felt like it got away from you for a moment, before getting back on track for a good ending. My only other comment is that you are a little comma happy. I'd like to borrow some of your's and distribute them in other stories.

 

[DeeZire]

Great story. I especially liked the escalation of the dog's reactions to the proceedings.

 

[Camilleon]

Thank you for your comments, and I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.

And freshface, I am comma happy. I can't help it!

 

[Fatwa_Morgana]

Very funny! Thanks for the great laughs. Morgana