Fun with Forms: The Kyrielle

KillerMuffin

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Hey, it's been a while since I learned a new form. I went snooping and found this little treasure.

It's an old french form and you know how they like their repetition and rhyming! This one is interesting, I think.

Some how to do it links:

http://www.geocities.com/Vienna/Strasse/9282/kyrielle.html
http://www.public.asu.edu/~aarios/formsofverse/reports2000/page3.html
http://www.poetryuk.co.uk/workshop/kyrielle.htm


From the first link:

The Kyrielle was once a very popular French form and dates from the Middle Ages.
It is a simple form written in quatrains (four lines of poetry) and it includes a refrain (repeat line, phrase, or word.
As is normal with French poetry it is syllabic, (usually eight syllables and is so in this case).
Accordingly we end up with quatrains rhyming like this a.a.b.B.. c.c.b.B etc and each quatrain finishing with the same line, phrase or word.

Here is a very enjoyable example by John Payne:

A Little Pain

A little pain, a little pleasure.
A little heaping up of treasure,
Then no more gazing upon the sun.
All things must end that have begun.

Where is the time for hope or doubt?
A puff of the wind and life is out:
A turn of the wheel and the rest is won.
All things must end that have begun.

Golden mornings and purple night,
Life that fails with the failing light:
Death is the only deathless one.
All things must end that have begun.

John Payne



In this example, you will notice that a rhyme pattern is established where couplets were used. As an alternative however, a rhyme may be used using alternate line rhyme and so we would end up with a pattern of a.b.a.B...c.b.c.B etc

Constructing this poem the poet has quite a choice: Another alternative is for the second line not rhyme at all, so we would end up with;
A.X. a. B...c.X.c.B etc

An even more unusual variation is the Kyrielle Sonnet
As you know the Sonnet is a 14 line poem. The natural tendency for french forms to link back also means that if we take a three stanza Kyrielle and add the first line (The link back as with ther Rondel Prime) and the refrain we have another French Sonnet and we would end up with.
A.a. b. B...c.c.b.B...d.d.b.B...A.B

Enjoy!
 
Aren’t poems hard enough to write
Without these rules and prohibitions,
When words, like a bar of soap in the bath,
Elude my grip like a slick of elision?

With a woof of chaos and a warp of dark
And a shuttle of unreliable light,
With thoughts like minnows in the path of a shark
Aren’t poerms hard enough to write?

When words, like a bar of soap in the bath,
Dissolve in a nacreous slime, like delight,
Aren’t we on a sufficiently difficult path?
Aren’t poems hard enough to write?

My thoughts are like minnows in the path of a shark
A scatter of vanishing, flickering light
With a woof of chaos and a warp of dark
Aren’t poems already a bugger to write?
 
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be aware and be steadfast.
 
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KillerMuffin said:
An even more unusual variation is the Kyrielle Sonnet
As you know the Sonnet is a 14 line poem. The natural tendency for french forms to link back also means that if we take a three stanza Kyrielle and add the first line (The link back as with ther Rondel Prime) and the refrain we have another French Sonnet and we would end up with.
A.a. b. B...c.c.b.B...d.d.b.B...A.B

Enjoy!

Does this look correct?

---------------------------------------------------
Separate Serendipities
------A Kyrielle Sonnet------

The time goes by as we grow old,
But funny things are being told.
Until we met I had no clue.
I loved you before I knew you.

Fair eyes, nice smile, soft lips, and then
A pair of arms to hug me when
I felt bad was the list I drew.
I loved you before I knew you.

That autumn night when we would meet,
Star-crossed it was, we felt the heat
As two hearts beat as one not two
I loved you before I knew you.

Somehow a spark between us flew --
I loved you before I knew you

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It seems like a "truth" is best told by the repetitive line. What do you think?

;)
- Judo
 
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This was too weird, so I had to post it. I had the Weather Channel on this morning and a commercial came on, advertising a Chevrolet Tahoe, I think. The narration over the imagery was done by James Garner.

And it was a kyrielle poem.

I listed to this repetitive line and started counting syllables as the commercial finished and thought to myself Oh my God, that's a kyrielle!

If I hear it again, I'm going to try and copy it down.

Has anyone else heard this?

;)
- Judo
 
Lord Have Mercy

Remembering how he touched me there
insistent fingers, white underwear.
Virtue gone faster than holy wind
Forgive me father for I have sinned

Writhing against his insistent finger
sighing as his tongue did linger.
On hallowed ground he had me pinned
Forgive me father for I have sinned.

Arching upward in supplication
thighs spread wide for penetration.
Knees rubbed raw and slightly skinned
Forgive me father for I have sinned.

I cried out Oh lord my God
spare your child, but not thy rod.
And although I know thou art chagrined
Forgive me father for I have sinned.
 
The Limo and the Fete
------- A Kyrielle Sonnet -------

Black limousine glides past ghetto blues,
Lowering its tinted glass for better views
Of a party alive with dance and food, deep fried --
The grass is always greener on the other side.

Laughter's echo peels and a chica samba rings.
Colored décor reflects the culture's spicy flings.
But in the dark, two eyes flow moist and hide --
The grass is always greener on the other side.

Young love leaves the fete on giddy feet
Against a tree, embrace to kiss, their heat complete,
But the black and long distracts their tender pride --
The grass is always greener on the other side.

Away the darkness rolls from scenes it can't abide --
The grass is always greener on the other side.
 
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