fucking graphic and filthy- something for everyone...

I find your site unreadable. Please post simple text on a plain white background, left or justified. You're a writer or a graphics artist. Not both, please.
 
Besides which, this forum is for this Web site, not some other.

However, I opened this thread because I assumed you were describing something of mine you had read here. :D
 
Besides which, this forum is for this Web site, not some other.

However, I opened this thread because I assumed you were describing something of mine you had read here. :D

What a coinkydink. I assumed it was something of yours, too. :D
 
yeah, this thread should've been posted in any number of other places on the message board. But it doesn't look like it's ad supported and I couldn't find that she's selling anything. It actually just looks like it's a bunch of super short illustrated stories. The one about sniffing panties is good, but you really need more to a story than some anecdotes and party-arty pics to get people to keep coming back. People do that in Amateur pic feedback all the time. Write a complete story.
 
Her writing is a little hard to follow, but it's passable.

Centering the text isn't helping.

I recommend justify-left and pay attention to the paragraphs; if she'd fret more on the flow/meter of her prose, she can be decent.
 
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