from Author's Hangout: i'm stuck...

[entitled]

...right in the middle of my very first story. The beginning is great, the ending looks good, and i know what i need to do to get from point A to point B - but the words won't come.

Anybody willing to take a look at the beginning and end, along with the basic idea of how it gets there, and give a little nudge?

Thanks!

 

[HomerPindar]

...right in the middle of my very first story. The beginning is great, the ending looks good, and i know what i need to do to get from point A to point B - but the words won't come.

Anybody willing to take a look at the beginning and end, along with the basic idea of how it gets there, and give a little nudge?

Thanks!

I'm too busy to edit work for folks, Entitled, sorry, but I might have a suggestion on your story.

eliminate the middle

Ok, over simplified, but there's no restriction on length. My english class just reviewed a two page short story I wrote... and the length wasn't a problem.

HomerPindar