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DarkLover

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Here's an idea. Not too deep but maybe has potential.

Futuristic, sci-fi setting. All the people are hot and sexy of course. On one particular day, there's a national holiday for sex. Anyone can be approached on the street and can be asked for sex. By law no one is allowed to refuse.

Does that give you any ideas? ;)
 
It sounds like a free-for-all! It might work better if it is more localized. For example, one person is given the right to have all the free unlimited sex he (or she) wants; nobody is allowed to refuse. Or, one person is sentenced to providing all the free, unlimited sex he (or she) is asked for, and is not allowed to refuse. Then you'd have a focus.
 
I like the idea with one person being able to choose any and all unlimited sex for a day... but then the whole idea gets a little too limited.

Maybe more of an Unlimited Free for All... You can refuse... (because if you couldnt and you did it anyways... it wouldnt be as much fun) but you mostly dont get refusals.. because why would the day be declared Unlimited Free for All Sex Holiday... ?? Someone had to vote for it.

Maybe more like Valentines Rules... You (one person) picks a person or many people... and that person/many people is your Unlimited Free for All Friend/s for the day. That could work... and everyone is doing it! ........ ;)

Oh and to keep the By Law statement alive.... Once your picked and accept its on like popcorn.. No backing out or anything.
 
I have a story idea where an American woman is working in a foreign country (take your pick, but wealth is common). She is sexually deprived and has heard about a club where once a woman goes in, anything can happen, but after its over she's paid a tidy sum. There could be anything involved, she doesn't know...

It's the not knowing that makes it so attractive... Straight sex? Another woman? Bondage? Pain?
 
That could be a very good story...

I have recently myself started to try my hand at a Novella.. I think My ideas are too big for Short story... I like to explain my characters and you have to go longer for that.. but the scene I have been working on has pretty much put me at a stop...

There is a young girl she doesnt have any sexual clue what so ever.. (picture.. English countryside living.. 1812) she hooks up with a complete vert.. and doesnt actually have sex but orgasams just the same. Later on she goes to his older brother and needs to explain what happened because she is nervous that she is ruined.. and needs help.

The brother takes avantage of her of course... She visits him in his study and he has her explain what happened.. and makes her show him how she felt and all that.. basically he never touches her and she gets herself right there in front of him standing in his study.. he directs her.. and she learns from him.. But I just cant get it on paper correctly.

Its the first actual sex scene between them.. and I cant get past it. SUCKS! I cant DO SEX right or a guys point of view correctly.
 
DarkLover said:
Here's an idea. Not too deep but maybe has potential.

Futuristic, sci-fi setting. All the people are hot and sexy of course. On one particular day, there's a national holiday for sex. Anyone can be approached on the street and can be asked for sex. By law no one is allowed to refuse.

Does that give you any ideas? ;)

I like the idea, but I like carnevil9's idea of it just being one person's right/prerogative to have all the sex he/she wants. Maybe something like a lottery gimmic, sex instead of cash. I imagine that famous people might be a little nervous about the hordes of people making their individual 'fantasy teams' with their name on it.
 
RainDove25 said:
That could be a very good story...

I have recently myself started to try my hand at a Novella.. I think My ideas are too big for Short story... I like to explain my characters and you have to go longer for that.. but the scene I have been working on has pretty much put me at a stop...

There is a young girl she doesnt have any sexual clue what so ever.. (picture.. English countryside living.. 1812) she hooks up with a complete vert.. and doesnt actually have sex but orgasams just the same. Later on she goes to his older brother and needs to explain what happened because she is nervous that she is ruined.. and needs help.

The brother takes avantage of her of course... She visits him in his study and he has her explain what happened.. and makes her show him how she felt and all that.. basically he never touches her and she gets herself right there in front of him standing in his study.. he directs her.. and she learns from him.. But I just cant get it on paper correctly.

Its the first actual sex scene between them.. and I cant get past it. SUCKS! I cant DO SEX right or a guys point of view correctly.

Myself, I think you are trying to hard. You obviously have talent, I can see that you write well just in the way that you typed out the reply that I am quoting. I think you have a good story within you, you just need a little self confidence, and to get over a little writers block.

Writers block is a misnomer...there is no block anywhere in a writer at any time. All it is, is a writer THINKING that what they right has to be good, or published, or perfect...My suggestion, and I know this is harder to do then it sounds, and that is to live in the moment. Forget about publishing it on literotica for the critics and trolls to punch holes at. Forget about being a writer. Just think of your story, sit down with a nice mug of coffee, and type out your story. Keep telling yourself you'll edit it later and have fun putting your story down on paper/computer screen.

You're a good writer, and your story does not suck, its just YOU THINK IT SUCKS. Once you realize your perception of your writing is tripping you up, maybe you can figure out how to like what you put down on paper?
 
Thanks. I agree with you. Most of the time I kill my ideas with the re-reading and constant going back to edit. I dont even know if my story would ever be good or not so much good as just fit into the Lit story line. I have found a new site that just started up for new writers that can publish their stuff while in progress and actual pulishers and editors email you their comments and suggestions... other readers can comment as well... which is even better because those are the people you are trying to reach.

I would like to write something to put on this site... I think if anything it would be specific parts that I work on with in my story itself.

a cup of coffee and my lap top with no one around sounds like a great idea! :cattail:

Deadwood said:
Myself, I think you are trying to hard. You obviously have talent, I can see that you write well just in the way that you typed out the reply that I am quoting. I think you have a good story within you, you just need a little self confidence, and to get over a little writers block.

Writers block is a misnomer...there is no block anywhere in a writer at any time. All it is, is a writer THINKING that what they right has to be good, or published, or perfect...My suggestion, and I know this is harder to do then it sounds, and that is to live in the moment. Forget about publishing it on literotica for the critics and trolls to punch holes at. Forget about being a writer. Just think of your story, sit down with a nice mug of coffee, and type out your story. Keep telling yourself you'll edit it later and have fun putting your story down on paper/computer screen.

You're a good writer, and your story does not suck, its just YOU THINK IT SUCKS. Once you realize your perception of your writing is tripping you up, maybe you can figure out how to like what you put down on paper?
 
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