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When you were tangling up MY sheets? Yes, I expect so.

I really wish I could remember the haiku I wrote ages ago about tangled white sheets and lying sated on opposite sides of the bed, alone.

In one of my stories, I referred to that as "the Grand Canyon afterglow."

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In one of my stories, I referred to that as "the Grand Canyon afterglow."

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Nice! I like it. The word afterglow gives it a bit more positive aspect than the melancholy I was going for in my haiku though. I hope I still have that haiku around somewhere in a folder. I'd hate to think it's lost to the sands of time.
 
Nice! I like it. The word afterglow gives it a bit more positive aspect than the melancholy I was going for in my haiku though. I hope I still have that haiku around somewhere in a folder. I'd hate to think it's lost to the sands of time.

But then you r4each for the other's hand.
So romantic. ;)
 
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