frandessop
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Nov 27, 2009
- Posts
- 239
Hi, an amateur here, relatively new to all of this, and doing it for fun.
Although I have just managed to publish another story here on Lit,
I cannot seem to find or settle on a format.
Lot's of critique from people that just comes across as 'put down'.
Luckily I'm thick skinned so I can take it. It's only words.
https://www.literotica.com/s/day-at-the-park-2
Easy digestible chunks, not too demanding, too many comma's.
Short and to the point, a 'quick fix' for a generation of low to no
attention individuals.
Although I have just managed to publish another story here on Lit,
I cannot seem to find or settle on a format.
Lot's of critique from people that just comes across as 'put down'.
Luckily I'm thick skinned so I can take it. It's only words.
https://www.literotica.com/s/day-at-the-park-2
Easy digestible chunks, not too demanding, too many comma's.
Short and to the point, a 'quick fix' for a generation of low to no
attention individuals.