Forever

[nycdoctor]

Eyes of coal and lips of fire,
To be with you, is my deepest desire.
Hair as dark as a raven's feather,
Stay with me, it will be forever.

With skin as soft as a velvet touch,
What's this feeling I feel? I love you so much.
The voice as sweet as a canary song,
Stay with me, I will do you no wrong.

And when you move, it's with such grace.
What's in the future, what do we face?
The time will come for us to be together,
Stay with me, it will be forever.

 

[WickedEve]

Hello. Is this poem for a special someone? Have you submitted any to literotica, yet? What other kinds of poems do you write?

 

[Tathagata]

Do we get to guess what the PTA stands for in your title??

 

[WickedEve]

Do we get to guess what the PTA stands for in your title??

What does this have to do with nycdoctor's poem? I joined the PTA, so it stands for the PTA. Well, I paid the dues but I haven't actually been to a meeting yet. I need to go, but I have nothing to wear that's not black and short. So, you see my problem. I bought sensible looking pants today. I don't like them, but they scream out, "PTA!" I'm wearing a black thong under them. Well, maybe not. I'm trying to get past that "black thong, dildo wielding" phase of my life. I even decided to stop thinking about sex. I decided that today. I'm throwing out my dildos and I'm going to stop thinking about sex. I'm changing my av to a church and writing Jesus poetry. Maybe bug or star poetry...
Yes, none of this has a thing to do with the poem.

 

[Guest]

. I need to go, but I have nothing to wear that's not black and short. So, you see my problem. I bought sensible looking pants today. .

Y'all don't live in Harper Valley, do ya?

 

[WickedEve]

Y'all don't live in Harper Valley, do ya?

I'm in a southern town of 6,000. We have to drive about 10 miles to get to a walmart and then we drive... well, we have a walmart and that's about it. Everyone is uptight in this town. So, I walk around smiling and being nice and wholesome. Unfortunately, I'm quite nice and wholesome for real. That seems to keep the name "loose woman" from being attached to me when I do the short, black thing and wear my bdsm pendant. So far, I've avoided: "My gracious, bless her heart. She just wasn't raised proper. All we can do is pray for her."

 

[WickedEve]

I almost forgot about the poem!

Here's an example of another way to handle stanza one:

A wisp of raven smolders against
the blaze of your smile
stay with me forever

Then on to stanza two and three, ending each with the "stay with me forever" line. So, you may want to give free verse a try.

 

[Angeline]

What does this have to do with nycdoctor's poem? I joined the PTA, so it stands for the PTA. Well, I paid the dues but I haven't actually been to a meeting yet. I need to go, but I have nothing to wear that's not black and short. So, you see my problem. I bought sensible looking pants today. I don't like them, but they scream out, "PTA!" I'm wearing a black thong under them. Well, maybe not. I'm trying to get past that "black thong, dildo wielding" phase of my life. I even decided to stop thinking about sex. I decided that today. I'm throwing out my dildos and I'm going to stop thinking about sex. I'm changing my av to a church and writing Jesus poetry. Maybe bug or star poetry...
Yes, none of this has a thing to do with the poem.

There's a lovely Jesus poster on the back of my bedroom door, left by the last tenant. It reminds me of Desiderata (not the lyric to Desperado--as certain people, ok one person, in this apartment has suggested). It's a lovely sentiment (though for my tastes a bit over the top, lol). Frankly, looking at it makes me a little nervous. Want it?

 

[WickedEve]

Frankly, looking at it makes me a little nervous. Want it?

umm... no.

 

[Angeline]

umm... no.

Odd that; Lauren turned me down too.

 

[nycdoctor]

I was writing this poem about this women in my mind head

 

[WickedEve]

Odd that; Lauren turned me down too.

hmm... go figure.

 

[WickedEve]

I was writing this poem about this women in my mind head

I'm sure you'll find her some day. And when you do, you can give her the poem. That would be very romantic.

 

[Angeline]

I'm sure you'll find her some day. And when you do, you can give her the poem. That would be very romantic.

It would melt me, that's for sure. She may be wicked, doc, but she gives good advice.

 

[WickedEve]

It would melt me, that's for sure. She may be wicked, doc, but she gives good advice.

You act as though wicked people can't give sensible advice. I don't lead all men down the path of bump and grind.
Hey, doc, that poem may actually get you some.

 

[nycdoctor]

Most women can't handle me sexually....

 

[WickedEve]

Most women can't handle me sexually....

How about if they use rubber gloves?

 

[Angeline]

How about if they use rubber gloves?

 

[nycdoctor]

Most women suck in bed for one thing and don't like to give oral. I like a women who wear a short dress and no underwear and go play pool with me

 

[Tathagata]

Most women suck in bed for one thing and don't like to give oral. I like a women who wear a short dress and no underwear and go play pool with me

I was gonna say that's right up Eve's alley but the inference there might be misconstrued...or...something

 

[Tathagata]

What does this have to do with nycdoctor's poem? I joined the PTA, so it stands for the PTA. Well, I paid the dues but I haven't actually been to a meeting yet. I need to go, but I have nothing to wear that's not black and short. So, you see my problem. I bought sensible looking pants today. I don't like them, but they scream out, "PTA!" I'm wearing a black thong under them. Well, maybe not. I'm trying to get past that "black thong, dildo wielding" phase of my life. I even decided to stop thinking about sex. I decided that today. I'm throwing out my dildos and I'm going to stop thinking about sex. I'm changing my av to a church and writing Jesus poetry. Maybe bug or star poetry...
Yes, none of this has a thing to do with the poem.

Driving for jesus
Driving for jesus
and making...alll the lights..

I forget where that came from...but we used to sing it in the band van, high out of our minds on the way home from a gig at 230 am..
and it usually worked...

 

[WickedEve]

Most women suck in bed for one thing and don't like to give oral. I like a women who wear a short dress and no underwear and go play pool with me

Well, at least they suck.
I like men who shut up and take out the trash and wear clean underwear.

 

[Angeline]

Well, at least they suck.
I like men who shut up and take out the trash and wear clean underwear.

It helps if they can cook and have a good cd collection, too.

 

[Tathagata]

Well, at least they suck.
I like men who shut up and take out the trash and wear clean underwear.

what if it's your underwear??
i'm just askin...

 

[Tathagata]

It helps if they can cook and have a good cd collection, too.

that's what I say about women....