For those who are not into incest play...

[Pathalimoss]

Answered

Is it good to be King?

 

[Stella_Omega]

No, you are not breaking open any new territory. Post! post!

Also, there WILL be people who complain about one thing or another. People are funny that way, and what they complain about will be something you never expected. But other folks will enjoy, and tell you all about it.

Write for yourself, and you'll find you've written for others as well

 

[michchick98]

No, you are not breaking open any new territory. Post! post!

Also, there WILL be people who complain about one thing or another. People are funny that way, and what they complain about will be something you never expected. But other folks will enjoy, and tell you all about it.

Write for yourself, and you'll find you've written for others as well

Yeah, what Stella said

 

[bronzeage]

One bit of caution. Lit considers "age play" where characters pretend to be minors to be the same as underage sex.

There is no way around this restriction. Be certain the characters maintain an adult persona, even when playing their role.

They can be Mommy and Baby, but only in a clearly metaphorical sense.

 

[Pathalimoss]

I certainly do write for myself, I just thought it would be nice if other people could enjoy the product of my effort, and it would be a shame if one small, unneccessary thing spoiled that. Thankyou for your encouragement and Stella and Chick.
Ageplay was never intended, but I will be careful to make sure there is no misunderstanding. I did not realise that it would be against the rules even if both characters were clearly adults, so thankyou for that warning Bronze.

It would still be nice to get a little more feedback from others though. Anyone?

 

[Guest]

I certainly do write for myself, I just thought it would be nice if other people could enjoy the product of my effort, and it would be a shame if one small, unneccessary thing spoiled that. Thankyou for your encouragement and Stella and Chick.
Ageplay was never intended, but I will be careful to make sure there is no misunderstanding. I did not realise that it would be against the rules even if both characters were clearly adults, so thankyou for that warning Bronze.

It would still be nice to get a little more feedback from others though. Anyone?

I kinda stayed away from this topic simply because I don't care for mommy/daddy fantasies.

I don't care for incest, and the mommy/daddy thing is too close to that. For me, that would make the story a deal-breaker, no matter how well written it is. I don't have anything against you writing it, and I understand that others may hold different opinions. It will definitely turn a lot of people on. But for me?

Can't do it.

But you're not writing for me. Or, if you are, knock it off.

write for yourself. if the topic turns you on, then go for it. you can not please everyone. Simply please yourself and you will find that you have a following. Plenty of people will be turned on, and you need neither our approval nor affirmation to go on.

as my friend used to say, "rock out with your cock out."

 

[neonlyte]

Incestuous sex (in stories) takes two major forms:
- premeditated taboo
- nurturing (primarily parent/child)

Using 'mommy' as a term of affection does not imply incest unless a filial relationship is established. As SO said, write for yourself.

Good luck.