Foot Story for Review

[Kavanaugh]

Hello,
I'm a new user, hoping that this story is the first of a series. I would very much like feedback regarding my story and writing.

Thanks!

kavanaugh

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=112832

 

[sanchopanza]

the moderator will move this post to the story feedback page. i'll give my feedback soon. very soon

 

[Guest]

I read it because I'd never read a 'foot' story before. Very well done, well written, finely detailed characters, humor, stroke.

best to you, Perdita