Flower & Seed

[djhindy]

My next series of stories is going to be fully bdsm/slave oriented. Entitles "Flower and Seed", the first portion introduces a 20 year old male, who finds himself abducted while returning from a vacation to south america. With no living close relatives, there is little hope for immediate notice of his disappearance, and with his being male, the search would likely not point towards abduction or the slave trade. A wealthy mistress, named Rose purchases this you man, and takes him to her private estate as a sexual slave and servant. The young man, given the name Seed by his owner, but either learn to accept his position as a piece of property, or escape his captivity.

I'd appreciate any comments on and ideas for this developing story!

 

[ShyAnonyMale]

Location of estate? Nationality/Origin, other information about 'Rose'?

-What jumps to my mind is that Rose is much much older (60's maybe). Probably a widow and was looking for a replacement for her late husband. Due to some circumstance she does not find this during dating and purchases the young stud to fulfill her desires.
-Also regarding the purchase/behavior. She starts by having the young man live with her, working off his "debt." He is ok with this and happy to have someone purchase him, and can afford the time because he has no family to worry about. After all he gets to stay in South America longer! Then she comes onto him one night and beds him, the first time he is willing and she makes it so he feels as if he is actually taking her. After this experience though she gradually becomes more demanding of him out of the bedroom, and also she progressively gets more controlling in the bedroom. Eventually she starts to take liberties with him, until she is no longer asking permission to inflict pain and use him however and whenever she likes.
-Then comes the night that he thinks will be his last with her, he is happy to be able to leave the next day. He is laying in bed and she comes into his room, she is dressed in a black silk bathrobe fitting to her form. Something that is intended to make a man weak in the knees by highlighting just the right curves on any woman. He notices her arms are behind her back, almost like an angry schoolteacher would have them. He mentions how he will be leaving tomorrow and thanks her as she approaches the bed and stands over him. She lifts up a leg and kneels onto one of his thighs across the bed, then onto his other thigh. She brings her arms around front and she is holding handcuffs. Before he can ask what she is doing she has his arms, and then he is cuffed to the headboard. At this point she gets off him silently. Leaves the room and returns with shackles for his feet. She shackles his feet together and chains them to the foot of the bed. Then she turns out his light so he cant see a thing. All he can perceive is the sound of her breath, and swish of the silken robe as she moves. She leans near his ear and he can feel her breath and she says to him "You are mine forever and always, sweet dreams." He hears her exit the room, still chained to the bed. The next morning he is awakened by heat on his face. He opens his eyes and sees her bare breasts above his face, the heat is from her thighs. Once she sees him awake she simply lowers her lips onto him and commands him to fuck her with his tongue. After he gives her an orgasm she offers him a choice "You can either ask me to unchain you and I will let you leave or..." then she moves down his body and presses her pussy lips again against the head of his hard cock, ready to slide down onto him "You can stay with me forever."

*Where there's room for filling in with BDSM is how the relationship progresses from consensual love making to Rose coming in with shackles and leaving him there helpless. What kind of restraints, denials, pain, and humiliation does she inflict. I'm thinking she probably punishes him for incorrectly performing his daily servant duties, with progressing severity.
**That last night that I detailed is intended to tread the line between consensual and dominating. I would say it is intended to be the first time Rose asks for permission to make her new boy serve her, but at that point it was already clear who was in control. At that point in my brain their sexual encounters had progressed from love making to Rose just plain using and practically raping the boy whenever and however she felt like. Then she almost flipped back to this kind and caring soul she was at first, but still asserted her dominance over him.

**God damn guys... writing is fucking fun.

 

[djhindy]

Location of estate? Nationality/Origin, other information about 'Rose'?

-Then comes the night that he thinks will be his last with her, he is happy to be able to leave the next day. He is laying in bed and she comes into his room, she is dressed in a black silk bathrobe fitting to her form. Something that is intended to make a man weak in the knees by highlighting just the right curves on any woman. He notices her arms are behind her back, almost like an angry schoolteacher would have them. He mentions how he will be leaving tomorrow and thanks her as she approaches the bed and stands over him. She lifts up a leg and kneels onto one of his thighs across the bed, then onto his other thigh. She brings her arms around front and she is holding handcuffs. Before he can ask what she is doing she has his arms, and then he is cuffed to the headboard. At this point she gets off him silently. Leaves the room and returns with shackles for his feet. She shackles his feet together and chains them to the foot of the bed. Then she turns out his light so he cant see a thing. All he can perceive is the sound of her breath, and swish of the silken robe as she moves. She leans near his ear and he can feel her breath and she says to him "You are mine forever and always, sweet dreams." He hears her exit the room, still chained to the bed. The next morning he is awakened by heat on his face. He opens his eyes and sees her bare breasts above his face, the heat is from her thighs. Once she sees him awake she simply lowers her lips onto him and commands him to fuck her with his tongue. After he gives her an orgasm she offers him a choice "You can either ask me to unchain you and I will let you leave or..." then she moves down his body and presses her pussy lips again against the head of his hard cock, ready to slide down onto him "You can stay with me forever."

*Where there's room for filling in with BDSM is how the relationship progresses from consensual love making to Rose coming in with shackles and leaving him there helpless. What kind of restraints, denials, pain, and humiliation does she inflict. I'm thinking she probably punishes him for incorrectly performing his daily servant duties, with progressing severity.
**That last night that I detailed is intended to tread the line between consensual and dominating. I would say it is intended to be the first time Rose asks for permission to make her new boy serve her, but at that point it was already clear who was in control. At that point in my brain their sexual encounters had progressed from love making to Rose just plain using and practically raping the boy whenever and however she felt like. Then she almost flipped back to this kind and caring soul she was at first, but still asserted her dominance over him.

**God damn guys... writing is fucking fun.

Some pretty good idea, however, the idea of an older women (40+) doesn't really appeal to me. my plan is to have a 30s woman, who is in key figure of a global black market of sexual slaves. She bought the guy for 2 reasons: one, s personal sex toy of the male variety, and two, she wants to have a child, preferably female, to run the company after her.

as to the location of the estate, i was thinking on land purchased from the Brazilian government, aka international land, therefor: few laws. keep the estate hidden in the Amazon, and helps prevent escape of slaves, as well as preventing legal action on the part of a government.

Nationality? Seed, the boy, is American. Rose can really be any nationality. opinions on this specifically would be helpful.

 

[ShyAnonyMale]

We weren't going the same direction. My story probably would run a bit towards the extreme for what you were intending.

 

[djhindy]

Yours sounds like fun too. You should go ahead and write it! I do need advice on the nationality and appearance of Rose, though.

 

[djhindy]

want to see if i can get any more advice on this. i've written a rough draft of the first part of the story, but i want to get more ideas. I wrote Rose in as a Brazilian, about 30 years old. I'm thinking of having the main character be the only male slave in her service, and having her favorite female companion becoming jealous of being replaced, causing problems there. I.E, set up to looks as though he disobeyed Rose, ect.