Hello all. I recently submitted my first story here and would love any feedback that you might have. I thought that I set it up for public feedback but I got an email that indicated otherwise. Either way, I would love to hear what you think, good or bad. Thanks!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=370858
JQMA
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=370858
JQMA