I'm sure this is going to sound REALLY original, but...
I just got my first story published here and I was looking for feedback. Even though the view counter says 11000+ I've only gotten three comments and 44 votes. Anyways, I was just hoping to get some commentary and pointers before I attempted a second effort.
The story is called "The Birthday Gift" and it's listed under the Crossdressers and Transexuals category:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=130670
Anything anyone has to offer is welcome. Thanks!
B.W.
I just got my first story published here and I was looking for feedback. Even though the view counter says 11000+ I've only gotten three comments and 44 votes. Anyways, I was just hoping to get some commentary and pointers before I attempted a second effort.
The story is called "The Birthday Gift" and it's listed under the Crossdressers and Transexuals category:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=130670
Anything anyone has to offer is welcome. Thanks!
B.W.
