balloftwine
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Hi there, I am still getting acquainted with BDSM through lots of reading. I am wondering if I could get some feedback on the beginning of a story I am writing, and whether or not it even represents BDSM.
For the past year you have been in a loving intimate relationship, yet you have a strong desire to try something new. Trusting your partner, you decide that you want communicate your desires. Feeling somewhat nervous and excited, you slyly approach your partner and wrap your hands around her waist, and whisper in their ear, “I have a proposition for you.” You feel your arousal heighten, as you look them in the eye and say, “I want you to be under my complete control for one night.” You see your partner’s brow furrow, but then devilish grin spread across her face and she playfully asks, “Now, what on earth would that entail?”
Somewhat shocked at her response, you quickly explain, “Well we would have a lot to address, but the basic idea is that I would be telling you what to do and you would have to obey.” As you say the words out loud, you feel a rush of excitement wash over your body. Your partner asks, “What sort of commands would I be given?” You pause a moment, observing her and you can’t help but notice her squirming in her seat. You take a breath and explain, “Well it could be anything within in reason. We both would set limits for things that definitely would not occur, set a safe word, and then talk about what sort of things we would want to happen. For example, I might choose to tie you to that chair your sitting in.” Your partner sensually kisses you on the lips and you both agree think about it and, talk later in the week.
The days pass slowly and feel yourself aching for the agreed upon time, Saturday at 7pm. At 7pm, you arrive downstairs command, “Stand still and put your arms behind your back.” You see her stand obediently, but then look around wandering what will happen next. In response to her breaking your command, you suddenly swat her ass and say, “When I give an order you must follow it, if you disobey again, I will punish you.” You see her chest rising with anticipation as you walk in a circle around her. You slowly bite her ear and whisper, “now take your clothes off.” As she undresses you see her skin blush. As you see her standing, naked you say, “You are so hot right now being under my control…I can do anything I want to you.” You place a blindfold against their eyelids and handcuffs on their wrists, rendering them helpless. Taking in the sight, you breathe. As you breathe, you realize how turned on you are right now, just thinking about the things you can do to her. Your mind wanders for a moment and you ground yourself back in reality by suddenly running your hands across her body. She shivers anticipation and you plan where to put your hands next. You pitch her nipple are surprised when you hear a moan escape from her lips…
For the past year you have been in a loving intimate relationship, yet you have a strong desire to try something new. Trusting your partner, you decide that you want communicate your desires. Feeling somewhat nervous and excited, you slyly approach your partner and wrap your hands around her waist, and whisper in their ear, “I have a proposition for you.” You feel your arousal heighten, as you look them in the eye and say, “I want you to be under my complete control for one night.” You see your partner’s brow furrow, but then devilish grin spread across her face and she playfully asks, “Now, what on earth would that entail?”
Somewhat shocked at her response, you quickly explain, “Well we would have a lot to address, but the basic idea is that I would be telling you what to do and you would have to obey.” As you say the words out loud, you feel a rush of excitement wash over your body. Your partner asks, “What sort of commands would I be given?” You pause a moment, observing her and you can’t help but notice her squirming in her seat. You take a breath and explain, “Well it could be anything within in reason. We both would set limits for things that definitely would not occur, set a safe word, and then talk about what sort of things we would want to happen. For example, I might choose to tie you to that chair your sitting in.” Your partner sensually kisses you on the lips and you both agree think about it and, talk later in the week.
The days pass slowly and feel yourself aching for the agreed upon time, Saturday at 7pm. At 7pm, you arrive downstairs command, “Stand still and put your arms behind your back.” You see her stand obediently, but then look around wandering what will happen next. In response to her breaking your command, you suddenly swat her ass and say, “When I give an order you must follow it, if you disobey again, I will punish you.” You see her chest rising with anticipation as you walk in a circle around her. You slowly bite her ear and whisper, “now take your clothes off.” As she undresses you see her skin blush. As you see her standing, naked you say, “You are so hot right now being under my control…I can do anything I want to you.” You place a blindfold against their eyelids and handcuffs on their wrists, rendering them helpless. Taking in the sight, you breathe. As you breathe, you realize how turned on you are right now, just thinking about the things you can do to her. Your mind wanders for a moment and you ground yourself back in reality by suddenly running your hands across her body. She shivers anticipation and you plan where to put your hands next. You pitch her nipple are surprised when you hear a moan escape from her lips…
