First time writing with words, please help.

[Hiding_in_Portland]

This is my first time writing a story for Literoitca and would like someone to help me with my story. My story is a desk clerk at hotel that has an erotic encounter with a guest. This story is based on an encounter I had while working at said hotel, and I thought it would make a good story. (About 50%-75% true)

My story is a little over 3500 words, and I hope has half way good grammar. I am not sure exactly what category I should put it in, but I figure that I could put it in Erotic Couplings, Exhibitionist & Voyeur or maybe even loving wives.

What I would like is an editor that can help me to make sure I am using correct grammar, make sure my story makes sense ;P, and help with the ending because it kinda feels funny or rushed to me and I am not sure where to change it.

I am using wordpad for my story if that matters.

Thank you for reading this even if you are not the person to help me.
~PS kinda of scared to post this.

 

[Great_Brit]

To quote Snooper (now gone from this site):

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[sr71plt]

I'm not all that sure that Snooper is really gone from this site.

 

[Hiding_in_Portland]

Damn I thought I had already done that, thanks.

 

[Hiding_in_Portland]

Think I fixed the PM. So now I just need an editor. ;P

 

[Hiding_in_Portland]

Thank you to those that responded to my post.