Really sorry if this is the wrong place to post this. I was hoping I could get some opinions from the experts. I've written a few short stories but this time decided to try something a bit longer.
I've read quite a few tips and lists online of what to do and what not to do, but it's mainly geared at non-sex writing. Although I'm sure there are similarities.
I've written a few chapters already but was wondering if I could ask any kind person with a few minutes to spare to read my opening chapter and point me in the direction of any obvious mistakes I'm making as a first time writer.
There's no sex or anything too explicit/hardcore in here, but just to warn it's a story about a gay guy into bdsm, particularly chastity belts and denial.
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I've read quite a few tips and lists online of what to do and what not to do, but it's mainly geared at non-sex writing. Although I'm sure there are similarities.
I've written a few chapters already but was wondering if I could ask any kind person with a few minutes to spare to read my opening chapter and point me in the direction of any obvious mistakes I'm making as a first time writer.
There's no sex or anything too explicit/hardcore in here, but just to warn it's a story about a gay guy into bdsm, particularly chastity belts and denial.
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