First-time writer seeking guidance [B/S Incest, 5k words]

[obp394]

Hello! Total noob. I thought I'd try my hand at creative writing. And where better to start than incest erotica?! I don't have a finished product yet, but I do have just under 5,000 words that took me way too long to produce. Before I go further I thought it would be productive to pause and seek feedback so I can correct any narrative or stylistic blunders I'm guilty of thus far. Or anything else that I don't even know I'm messing up.

To be clear, not looking for a review of spelling/grammar, only pace/narrative/structure, the very basics.

If you'd be willing to take a look, lmk. Appreciate you either way!

 

[AlinaX]

Again no promises, but send me a PM (i.e., start a 'conversation') and I may be able to help a bit.

 

[MartletMartlet]

I'll read it and give you feedback

 

[Cobaltofdark]

I'll look at it let's see the last thing I read was a cure for insomnia. So bars pretty low lol pm

 

[Hallie_Jazz]

Hello! Total noob. I thought I'd try my hand at creative writing. And where better to start than incest erotica?! I don't have a finished product yet, but I do have just under 5,000 words that took me way too long to produce. Before I go further I thought it would be productive to pause and seek feedback so I can correct any narrative or stylistic blunders I'm guilty of thus far. Or anything else that I don't even know I'm messing up.

To be clear, not looking for a review of spelling/grammar, only pace/narrative/structure, the very basics.

If you'd be willing to take a look, lmk. Appreciate you either way!

Hi, I'd be happy to look it over if you like.
I haven't got anything published on here but I have a backlog of stories I've written over a number of years.
I couldn't help you with spelling and grammar but in terms of the story and sructure, characters etc I might be able to help.

 

[McSmoothie]

I'll take a look if you submit it to an editor via the site.

https://www.literotica.com/my/#/editors/editors