For now, the story is at about 3000 words. It includes Gay male and accidental mind control. It stays pretty much on the most recognizable parts of the games, so there is no need for deep knowledge of the lore, though if something interesting comes up, I can use it.
Any feedback on possible improvements would be appreciated, but my writing style would be the most important aspect, since it's my first time trying to write erotica. I intend to have at least one follow-up chapter, so I would like to know if my chapter ends on a satisfying enough point.
( It's my first time posting on the forums, I hope I'm not making any goof.)
Any feedback on possible improvements would be appreciated, but my writing style would be the most important aspect, since it's my first time trying to write erotica. I intend to have at least one follow-up chapter, so I would like to know if my chapter ends on a satisfying enough point.
( It's my first time posting on the forums, I hope I'm not making any goof.)
