First time writer looking for feed back.

[imamonger]

I have been an avid reader on literotica for many years. I have decided to get my feet wet, so to say, and am looking for an editor. I'm certain that my spelling is correct, and that for the most part, so is the punctuation.
I want to know that the story flows properly and is easy to follow.
It is approx. 3500 words in US English, and would be submitted in the Erotic Couplings category.
I am open to any feed back offered.
Thank you.
D

 

[JonB1969]

I have been an avid reader on literotica for many years. I have decided to get my feet wet, so to say, and am looking for an editor. I'm certain that my spelling is correct, and that for the most part, so is the punctuation.
I want to know that the story flows properly and is easy to follow.
It is approx. 3500 words in US English, and would be submitted in the Erotic Couplings category.
I am open to any feed back offered.
Thank you.
D

I'd be more than happy to look over your story and offer what advice I could.