First time writer looking for Editor

[SexyShel]

Wonder if anyone would be kind enough to help edit this story? Its our first attempt at a submission. The story is finished and we thought it met all the guidelines, but still rejected.

The story involves Shels' first time with another man, so would fit possibly "loving wives" or "inter-racial.

Shel

 

[fungi469]

I'm willing to take a look at it. PM me and I'll give you my ema to send it to me as a MS Word attachment.