H hrdmn10 Virgin Joined Oct 22, 2008 Posts 10 Mar 30, 2011 #1 I have no idea if it is any good. Should I continue or simply hit the delete button? Looking for a editor who might give me constructive (gentle please) but honest opinion. Thanks! (probably in the Erotic Couplings category)
I have no idea if it is any good. Should I continue or simply hit the delete button? Looking for a editor who might give me constructive (gentle please) but honest opinion. Thanks! (probably in the Erotic Couplings category)
elfin_odalisque Literotica Guru Joined Feb 3, 2004 Posts 10,056 Apr 7, 2011 #2 Try the Story Feedback forum and post the text, for goodness sake.
