First-time Mother/Son taboo w/ reluctance story series published, looking for feedback

Silas_Noct

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My name: Silas_Noct
The series: Debt: The Novella Adaptation
The individual stories: 1) The Negotiation, 2) The Conspiracy, and 3) Perseverance

https://www.literotica.com/series/se/debt-the-novella-adaptation

Greetings! I am a newish author on Literotica, and I have complete three stories in a series that work more or less as a self-contained trilogy. I'll be up front and say that I am adapting (some would call it fan fiction) a story from an adult comic written and illustrated by JDSeal called Debt. I have spoken directly with JDSeal through his Discord channel and he has given me his blessing to write and publish these adaptations of his story on Literotica.

Disclaimer: this is a mother/son taboo story with explicit incest, psychological manipulation, and reluctant consent. A side plot also involves a consensual but sinisterly motivated sister/brother relationship. It's not a happy story, but I think that it's still an erotic one that is deeply interesting, thought provoking, and satisfying to read.

I thought the characters in JD's story were ripe for a deeper psychological exploration than is readily available in comic format, which is by virtue of its nature is much more quickly paced and visually driven.

The story revolves around a mother who, used to the nicities of an upper middle class lifestyle that she intentionally married into to escape a childhood of poverty, is suddenly thrust into debt because of her husband's poor financial management. Her son, who is successfully climbing his way up the corporate ladder in his own job, has the means to relieve her of that debt. You can see where this is going.

The son simultaneously holds a deep resentment toward, and has a longing connection with, his aloof and emotionally spartan mother. I liked the setup of the son being old enough (24) to be psychologically and financially independent from his parents, even if his emotional development is stunted from being raised in a household by parents focused on winning instead of connecting. His sister also has a role to play in this dark triangle.

Please have a read of the three stories and tell me how you think the story handles its themes of: 1) the fallout caused by love withheld, 2) the tension between want and morality, 3) the difference between domination and and connection, and 4) the universal fears of poverty, aging, and loneliness


My goal was to write a erotically charged psychological thriller. Balancing sexy prose with the dark themes that I explore in these stories is a tricky balance. I'd like honest feedback on how I did. I have much to say about these topics and others, but I'll let the conversation start first!

Thank you.
 
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