First Time in Public Forum

[satinlvr_mwf]

Hi! This is my first time using the public comments function with one of my stories...I hope this is the right place to be! The story I wrote is "Trolling for Vengance!".

Thanks!

 

[Green_Gem]

Hi Satinlvr

It helps to post a link to your story if you want people to read it. Here it is:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=134138

Green_Gem

 

[satinlvr_mwf]

Doh!

Thanks Green Gem for your help on this... I didn' t know one could do that...

 

[satinlvr_mwf]

My rant!

[/rant on] Ok, I have been receiving a number of posts and feedback about this story, and have only one comment to make: Please do not judge it about the morality of the story!!! It is not for anyone but those who are DIRECTLY involved!!! In this case, THIS IS A STORY!!! This did not happen with me in real life, so please do not send me put-downs, post derogatory comments about my life, or anything else!

For that matter, if you ARE going to make such comments, please have a spine, and identify yourself, rather than be anonymous! It makes you look like a coward. If you are going to slam me, pleease be man enough to do it with an identity! [/end of rant]

For those who have provided some constructive feedback, I do thank you, and have taken your advice to heart. Will there be a sequel? Based upon what I have heard from those with rational postings, the answer is probably!

Thanks, everyone!

*takes a deep breath, and feels better now!*

 

[Boxlicker101]

Re: My rant!

[/rant on] Ok, I have been receiving a number of posts and feedback about this story, and have only one comment to make: Please do not judge it about the morality of the story!!! It is not for anyone but those who are DIRECTLY involved!!! In this case, THIS IS A STORY!!! This did not happen with me in real life, so please do not send me put-downs, post derogatory comments about my life, or anything else!

For that matter, if you ARE going to make such comments, please have a spine, and identify yourself, rather than be anonymous! It makes you look like a coward. If you are going to slam me, pleease be man enough to do it with an identity! [/end of rant]

For those who have provided some constructive feedback, I do thank you, and have taken your advice to heart. Will there be a sequel? Based upon what I have heard from those with rational postings, the answer is probably!

Thanks, everyone!

*takes a deep breath, and feels better now!*

Hi, Satin. You must be a hell of a writer for people to write to you complaining about your characters as if they are real people. I haven't read it but I did read the PC and I will read it later and leave a comment. Don't worry about idiots who complain about the subject matter. If they don't want to read porn or erotica, they shouldn't come to this site.

 

[Green_Gem]

Satinlvr,

Your story is in 'Loving Wives' and strangely enough I recently posted a thread in the Author's Hangout about Cuckolding and the L W category because I have a story unfolding that will go there.

Aside from the very insightful answers from authors who had posted in the category, it emerged that the amount of feedback and often the anger that stories there evoke, is well known. So, don't feel bad about hitting a few nerves. As Boxlicker rightly says, you must have hit home emotionaly with your writing, and that's really all you can hope for as a writer. I haven't read the story yet, but will do so and send you some feedback too.

Green_Gem

 

[satinlvr_mwf]

Thanks...

To Boxlicker and Green Gem for your kind words of support. My stories have been taking some awful harsh criticism (actually, I think most of it is actually directed at me, personally), and so I have terminated the public comments function.

To those who may have a gripe with the theme of my stories (and have not had the guts to post your name with your rather demeaning comments):

If you do not like it, then don't read it. No one is forcing a gun to your head. And just to make a point, very soon I will right a true submission, of an event that happened to me, personally, that involved some of the themes I write about. It will be truthful, and hopefully, it will give something for those of you who feel morally superior, because your idea of sexuality isn't as open as mine...

 

[Spurious Scribe]

Okay, I read your story and admit that I might have some issues with it. But it is just me and I'll deal. I voted for your story and gave it pretty high marks mostly for style and originality. For my likes, the story line was a bit out there, but held my interest in spite of the fact. As you, or someone else, said earlier, "hey... it's just a story!"

I'm always looking for phrases and descriptions that I don't often encounter ('cause I steal them for my own use!). I came across two that I am tucking away for some future occasion when they will fit.

"...tried to coax his cock into yielding his essence..."
and
"...finished his attempt to breed me..." <--- To those who haven't read your story, this will probably make them think that your story is one of rampant BDSM. WRONG!

So thanks for the phrases that I stole, and I wish you well in any stories that you choose to continue to share here on Literotica.

K.

 

[satinlvr_mwf]

Contructive Info

Thank you very much for the vote of confidence and honest, rational feedback! I am trying to not only improve my writing style, but also heal fromsome personal events that I will not go into now...

I also received a feedback that contained a lot of points. Some of them I did not want to hear, (or read), but should, since improvement is one of my goals, and I do appreciate the message!

I am about 1/3 the way done with chapter 2, and will post it when I am ready, but am going to re-edit it first, to incorporate those points that make snese to me!

Again, thanks!

 

[satinlvr_mwf]

A Typical example of a spineless wimp...

Below is a feedback I just received, yet has been very typical of my story:

this message contains feedback for: satinlvr_mwf
About the submission: Trolling for Vengance
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Completely unreal. This type of story
should be listed under "castrated men"
or wimp husbands.
Any guy I know would have divorced her on the spot.
AND any women I know, would have talked
to the husband before doing something
that dumb.
And for some guy to tell the husband she
is "his bitch" -- yeah, right. Can you
spell "shotgun"???

I must be missing the point about feedbacks. I thought they were supposed to be about writing styles, editorial problems, things like that. Not attackes about the content of a story, or things they do not like about what a character did in the story... ::

Would someone please clarify this for me? Do I have the wrong expectation???

Thanks!

Satin

 

[asian_sensation]

wow
i wish i got that much feedback. he he dont worry about the comments, it just means people are reading your work. If your work has caused somebody to comment, then it just means that you are questioning their values. And for your characters to have that kind of connection then it must mean you are doing something right. Keep up the good work.

 

[satinlvr_mwf]

Chapter Two...

Another exciting feedback...

no choice
04/21/04 by Anonymous in USA
If Id had a choice of raising a god damned half nigger pickininny to adulthood or taking a chance on aborting my own kid, I'd have cut it out of her belly myself with a dull fucking knife. The sob was wrong to cheat on his wife but having to fuck a nigger for revenge was a little extreme, especially the bitch getting knocked up by a jive assed black


Or this one:

revenge?????
04/21/04 by Anonymous
divorce the bitch fucking a nigger is not revenge


The only response I can give to these rather cowardly bigots is that your opinion is hardly worth noting...

 

[DarkLit]

Just keep writing and don't sweat the comments (some of which appear to be utterly racist and fairly ignorant). Sounds like you're really stirring some folks up with your story, and hey, sometimes that's what writing is all about.

 

[satinlvr_mwf]

Chapter Mix-up

Ok, near as I can find out, the chapters on this have gotten somewhat mixed up...

I resubmitted chapter 1 of this story after editing it further, and attempted to submit it as Trolling for Vengance Ch.1- Revised , and post it in the Erotic Encounters section, due to all the heat I got from the wonderful readers of the Loving Wives section.

I also submitted Trolling for Vengance Ch. 2, which is still pending. So, Ch.2 on the system is really Ch. 1, and who knows what Ch. 2 is going to be numbered...

I have sent an e-mail about this, but not sure how this is going to fall out...

Just an FYI that I hope will clear up the confusion, until the Titles get posted properly...

 

[lostandfounder]

I thought your story was good. Well written and you do a good job at painting a picture. The spurned lover aspect was an interesting way of approaching it, although I can see why some people have a hard time with it in the loving wives section.

I can't believe some of the hostility on some of these forums either. Why some people feel the need to vent their anger at something as trivial as a story is beyond me.

 

[satinlvr_mwf]

Thanks, Lost...

I appreciate your comments, and am glad to know that I am not the only one getting flamed because someone does not like the topic, theme, or storyline...

In fact, here are two more "gems" I just got:

Needs more work
04/22/04 by don87654 in USA
Anyone can write a nigger fucks a white woman story. What is the ending on this one? Did she get preggie again, or what? I gave you a '1' because the story is obviously not finished.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

maybe
04/22/04 by fumunda cheeze in USA Mo
Maybe the stupid bitch will get aids. Vengeance is one thing, but being dumb is something else. If she really wants to get even with her straying spouse,get him fired, take his cheating ass to court for a good judicial cleaning. His lady friend would kick his ass too if he didn't have any money, or prestige, as a businessman.

Gary

I am seriously beginning to wonder about the IQ of some of the readers on this site...

 

[lostandfounder]

If you wanted...

I re-read your stories and I think your style and point of view would be a good fit for a story I have written called Love Under GrAy Skies . It's a multiple path story on Literotica's sister site Chyoo . The story that develops from the "A rainy day, sad but beautiful." thread would be interesting if told from the woman's point of view, something I have tried to do, but can't find the voice for.


If nothing else, just give it a look over, and tell me what you think...or not...you know, whatever. (He trails off, trying to be cool about it)

 

[satinlvr_mwf]

Another Brain-dead Feedback

This is almost becoming a story all by itself...

I cannot imagine how ignorant, bigoted, and/or judgemental people seem to be. The one single common element I have been able to find is that all the hostility seems to be coming from people old enough to retire! Maybe they are applying their 1940's values to today. If so, then they must be having a real struggle in coping with the 21st century...

Here is the latest flame mail:

This message contains feedback for: satinlvr_mwf
About the submission: Trolling for Vengeance Ch. 02
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Vengeance is one thing , total stupidity is another.I can't believe
any woman is stupid enough to act like the woman in satilvr's story. With
luck the heroine might only be arrested and jailed. Without luck she
could end up in the hospital beaten and gang raped with aids and with
even worse luck she might be in a mortuary. Vengeance is divorcing the
husband, suing him for everything he has and throwing him out but not
making a beaten and dead hooker out of yourself. I can't believe Satin is
female. No woman could portray another woman as that stupid. If she is
really a wife, her husband has my sympathy
60 year old George

Hey, George! If I was your wife, I would find a pair of black studs and let them take me in our marital bed!