amraam840
Really Really Experienced
- Joined
- Jan 14, 2005
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Hey all. I'm not too experienced in fictional writing, much less making it erotic. I recently posted to a sexual role play here in lit and there was no more room for men in the thread. I happen to like camping and hiking and such and although I've never experienced such joys as are brought by the outdoor experience with a woman, I decided to post to this thread as a woman anyway. This is my first time writing from a woman's perspective, or had a woman as my character in anything I've written. All my experience until this point is in analytical writing, non-fiction, essay's etc... I wanted to know if anyone can read my part in this thread and let me know if I'm too wordy or what not. Actually any feedback at all would be bitchin. Um. I hope to hear from some women that are used to writing as women because I like what I wrote but I know everything can spare room for improvment. If you have any thoughts or feedback, please let me know. Thanks!
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=316916
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=316916