Jaguar0405
Virgin
- Joined
- Feb 19, 2009
- Posts
- 2
Hello all,
I'm not sure quite why the urge to write a story struck me so suddenly, but it has. I have been a reader of this site for many years now. For some reason, while lying in bed two nights ago, I began to create the narrative that has coalesced into my story. I'd like to find an editor to help me turn my story into an enjoyable piece for this site.
The story itself is for the Anal category, and is meant as a simpler erotic story. It has almost no plot, just a description of a morning romp of two lovers, based on a combination of my own experiences and fantasies. I am fairly confidant in my spelling and grammar, but a second pair of eyes never huts. Mostly, I'm looking for some feedback on the style and readability of the story -- I've always been very good with expository writing and struggled with creative writing.
Additionally, I would appreciate the opinion of a (or even multiple) female authors/editors regarding my descriptions of the lady in the story, since I have a penis and don't really know what sex is truly like for a woman.
Anyone who would be willing to help out, please reply or send me a PM.
Many thanks,
Jaguar0405
I'm not sure quite why the urge to write a story struck me so suddenly, but it has. I have been a reader of this site for many years now. For some reason, while lying in bed two nights ago, I began to create the narrative that has coalesced into my story. I'd like to find an editor to help me turn my story into an enjoyable piece for this site.
The story itself is for the Anal category, and is meant as a simpler erotic story. It has almost no plot, just a description of a morning romp of two lovers, based on a combination of my own experiences and fantasies. I am fairly confidant in my spelling and grammar, but a second pair of eyes never huts. Mostly, I'm looking for some feedback on the style and readability of the story -- I've always been very good with expository writing and struggled with creative writing.
Additionally, I would appreciate the opinion of a (or even multiple) female authors/editors regarding my descriptions of the lady in the story, since I have a penis and don't really know what sex is truly like for a woman.
Anyone who would be willing to help out, please reply or send me a PM.
Many thanks,
Jaguar0405
