apom
A Piece Of Meat
- Joined
- Oct 11, 2015
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Hello.
I'm looking for help cleaning up the first half of a story I've been working on for a couple of months now. It's 11k words--a little bit of self-bondage, a little bit of lesbian exploration and a lot of a young'ish woman craving total subjugation and getting exactly what she asks for.
I write a lot, but this is the first time I've written anything for anyone to read other than myself. So I'd like to find someone interested in helping a rookie get better. I think I need help more with story consistency and comprehension than I do grammar and stuff, but I figure an editor will know better what I need than I do.
I’m in no huge rush as far as turnaround, as I’m busy writing the second half of my story.
My PM’s are on.
Thanks!
I'm looking for help cleaning up the first half of a story I've been working on for a couple of months now. It's 11k words--a little bit of self-bondage, a little bit of lesbian exploration and a lot of a young'ish woman craving total subjugation and getting exactly what she asks for.
I write a lot, but this is the first time I've written anything for anyone to read other than myself. So I'd like to find someone interested in helping a rookie get better. I think I need help more with story consistency and comprehension than I do grammar and stuff, but I figure an editor will know better what I need than I do.
I’m in no huge rush as far as turnaround, as I’m busy writing the second half of my story.
My PM’s are on.
Thanks!