First Time Author, Feedback Appreciated

[DeeperDown]

Working on my first story series and haven't been getting much feedback in the comments.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1030908&page=submissions

Takes me a long time to write these so just trying to garner whether I should continue.

 

[tickledkitty]

Of course you should continue. I say that with only having taken a peek at your submission page. You've got two H's, so obviously someone likes your work. You enjoy writing, right?

Of course you should continue.

 

[youngrabbit]

maybe we could help each other, i'm looking for some feedback on my first story