First Submission

Calyxxx

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I recently submitted a story that actually started out as a pm to a friend as a "description" of how my day went... Just curious as to the public opinion of it.

It can be found at the link mentioned in my sig line....
 
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Calyxxx said:
I recently submitted a story that actually started out as a pm to a friend as a "description" of how my day went... Just curious as to the public opinion of it.

It can be found at the link mentioned in my sig line....

I R.V.C.ed on your story. It was great and you are a great writer, IMHO.
 
thanks so much for the compliment... i kind of thought i sorta skimped a bit on the first parts of the story... I probably could have done better... I suppose I'll just do better on my second one! Thanks again so much for taking the time to read it!!! :kiss: :kiss: :rose: :kiss: :kiss:
 
I thought it was pretty cool. The matter-of-fact tone added a great tone of irreverence and realism. I'm not big into food fetish, but I still think it's a hot story. Keep 'em coming...


StS


Calyxxx said:
I recently submitted a story that actually started out as a pm to a friend as a "description" of how my day went... Just curious as to the public opinion of it.
 
Hmm...I wonder if I did that...

Enjoyed your story. I was surprised it effected me actually. But it did. Guess my lover is in for somethin' hot when he gets home. lol. Good story, keep 'em coming, or... well... You know....
 
Once again, I'm glad you all liked it. Im not too big into food fetish either, it kinda just popped into my head.... I'm interested to try writing another story.. if only i could get another idea that fast!!!


thanks again for the compliments! :rose: :kiss:
 
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