First Submission

[de-valmont]

Just put my very first submission (a poem) to lit, wondered if any of you wanted to take a look at it, tear it to pieces love it, or whatever and tell me what you think

Thanks in advance.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=90204

 

[alisonwunderlnd]

I liked it

 

[de-valmont]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it Alison