First Submission Family Love (Neighbours)

Pencoch2

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Just had this submission published. My comments and private messages were disabled so though voted to 4.5 no feed back as such. Please review as I have other chapters lined up. Comments good and bad welcomed, provided they are constructive of course.
 
Pencoch2 said:
Just had this submission published. My comments and private messages were disabled so though voted to 4.5 no feed back as such. Please review as I have other chapters lined up. Comments good and bad welcomed, provided they are constructive of course.

Next time please put a link in. Family Love Ch. 01

I R.V.C.ed on your story. Nice job writing.


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