sexygirl1311
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I am brand new to this and i'd like some feedback on my first short story.
Here it is: "Drinks"
"he's almost here" I remember the night we met, it wasn't long ago. He was just starting his music career and my friends and I went to his bands gig. He wasn't that bad at all. After the show we went back stage and he introduced himself "Hey, i'm Kolton" "Kolton" i repeated. I loved the way his name rolled off my tounge. Looking at him my thoughts went dirty. I had to press my thighs together. Mmm this boy would be fun to play with was my first thought. We hit it off immediately and hung out a few times after that. That was almost 3 month ago. Last night he called and we caught up on life. His band was really getting alot of business and i was proud of him. I couldn't help but invite him over tonight, i've missed this sexy man. "knock knock" my thoughts came back to the present as i heard him knock on the door. I answer the door and immediately blush as he looks at me. Good thing i bought this brand new dress. I can tell he likes it by the way he runs his eyes down my body. It hugs me in all the right places. Tight across my chest and clutching my thighs, not leaving much to the imagination. "come in" i whisper. taking his hand i pull him into the kitchen and start pouring us a drink, my special twist. After handing him his i walk into the living room shaking my hips. I know he's watching my ass. I giggle.
"what are you giggling at Missy?" He's in a playful mood. Good! My inside turn, i know i'm definitely getting lucky tonight "oh nothing just some silly thoughts" i pull him down beside me on the couch and watch him as he takes a sip and makes a funny face. "what's that look for? Am i that bad at mixing drinks" "no" he laughs "this is just alittle strong, it'll get me buzzed pretty quick" i place my hand on his upper thigh, winking, then i climb into his lap, straddling him. "is that really a bad thing?" I lean down and lay a soft kiss on his neck "isn't that how the fun always starts?" I instantly feel the alcohol hit me as he places his hands under my dress and grabs my ass. "mmm no panties?" I shake my head and bite my lip. With a boost of confidene i pull my skimpy little dress off of my body, wearing only a bra i whisper "what do you think?" He looks me up and down and i feel my face get hot. He response softly by biting and kissing along my neck, squeezing my ass. "i take that as a good sign" i take off my bra and push my chest out, offering my boobs. Oh god! By the way he kissed me the last time we met up,i could tell that this man would be really great with his mouth. He proves me right by latching onto one of my boobs and starts licking and sucking on my nipple driving me wild, a small moam escapes my lips as i put my hands up in his hair. I can feel him hard against my thigh. He continues his sweet assault on both of my boobs. "let's take these off" i say as i stand up and drop to my knees, unbuttoning his pants and slide them down his hips, taking his boxers with them. I look up at him and give him a devilish smiles as i take his hard cock in my hands. I giggle. "looks like someone is happy to see me!" I kiss the tip and giggle again as his jaw drops. Ughh i just want to get down to business. I close my eyes and wink as i slide him balls deep into my awaiting mouth. My tounge slashes all around his very hard friend. I head him gasp and i know i'm doing a great job. Mmm he taste rather good and he's a very good size. I keep downing him over and over and squeeze his thighs. I don't want him to cum, after awhile i stop and stand up. I swear i hear him whimper. "don't worry the fun is just starting" straddling him again i take ahold of his cock and lean my head back as i rub him up and down my very wet slit. He grabs my hands and wraps them both around his neck as he leans me forward and slides two fingers inside me. now it's my turn to gasp! He kisses me hard before i even have time to moan, my hips can't help but move against his fingers "fuck you are so ready" his voice sounds strained. I can tell he's ready too! He picks me up and takes me to my bedroom, and softly drops my down on my bed, climbing over me. "you are insanly sexy, the moment i saw you at my gig i knew i had to touch you" he slides his finger down my body and leans forward "are you on birth control?" He whispers in my ear. Mmm he wants skin on skin too! "i respond by spreading my legs. Luckily he takes my hint and instantly slams inside me. Fuck! "oh my god" is all i can say as he drives into me mercilessly! He works his hips like a god!I wrap my legs around his hips, i'm all sensation as i feel him completely take over. My hands are scratching down his back and my legs try desperately to get him deeper inside me. All to soon i'm ontop, i frown thinking i have to take over. But suprisingly he's still taking charge, grasping my hips and pulling me up then thrusting up deliciously as he meets my downward thrust. Fuck this man has made my body jello under his skilled hands! He sits up and his mouth is on my chest again. I can feel myself going higher. I can tell this will be fast! "fuck me!" With the combination of his mouth and him slamming me down on his cock repeatedly i can barely hold on anymore. He senses it and moans " that's it baby, let go and let me feel your warm cumm all over my cock" not being able to hold on any longer i let go and i fall into waves and waves of pleasure.
He doesn't stop, and i can't come down. Thinking that i can't possibly cum anymore he grasps my hips really hard as he slams into me over and over and he moans my name as i feel him pour into me which just sets me off yet again. I collapse against his chest feeling very well used. God t
Here it is: "Drinks"
"he's almost here" I remember the night we met, it wasn't long ago. He was just starting his music career and my friends and I went to his bands gig. He wasn't that bad at all. After the show we went back stage and he introduced himself "Hey, i'm Kolton" "Kolton" i repeated. I loved the way his name rolled off my tounge. Looking at him my thoughts went dirty. I had to press my thighs together. Mmm this boy would be fun to play with was my first thought. We hit it off immediately and hung out a few times after that. That was almost 3 month ago. Last night he called and we caught up on life. His band was really getting alot of business and i was proud of him. I couldn't help but invite him over tonight, i've missed this sexy man. "knock knock" my thoughts came back to the present as i heard him knock on the door. I answer the door and immediately blush as he looks at me. Good thing i bought this brand new dress. I can tell he likes it by the way he runs his eyes down my body. It hugs me in all the right places. Tight across my chest and clutching my thighs, not leaving much to the imagination. "come in" i whisper. taking his hand i pull him into the kitchen and start pouring us a drink, my special twist. After handing him his i walk into the living room shaking my hips. I know he's watching my ass. I giggle.
"what are you giggling at Missy?" He's in a playful mood. Good! My inside turn, i know i'm definitely getting lucky tonight "oh nothing just some silly thoughts" i pull him down beside me on the couch and watch him as he takes a sip and makes a funny face. "what's that look for? Am i that bad at mixing drinks" "no" he laughs "this is just alittle strong, it'll get me buzzed pretty quick" i place my hand on his upper thigh, winking, then i climb into his lap, straddling him. "is that really a bad thing?" I lean down and lay a soft kiss on his neck "isn't that how the fun always starts?" I instantly feel the alcohol hit me as he places his hands under my dress and grabs my ass. "mmm no panties?" I shake my head and bite my lip. With a boost of confidene i pull my skimpy little dress off of my body, wearing only a bra i whisper "what do you think?" He looks me up and down and i feel my face get hot. He response softly by biting and kissing along my neck, squeezing my ass. "i take that as a good sign" i take off my bra and push my chest out, offering my boobs. Oh god! By the way he kissed me the last time we met up,i could tell that this man would be really great with his mouth. He proves me right by latching onto one of my boobs and starts licking and sucking on my nipple driving me wild, a small moam escapes my lips as i put my hands up in his hair. I can feel him hard against my thigh. He continues his sweet assault on both of my boobs. "let's take these off" i say as i stand up and drop to my knees, unbuttoning his pants and slide them down his hips, taking his boxers with them. I look up at him and give him a devilish smiles as i take his hard cock in my hands. I giggle. "looks like someone is happy to see me!" I kiss the tip and giggle again as his jaw drops. Ughh i just want to get down to business. I close my eyes and wink as i slide him balls deep into my awaiting mouth. My tounge slashes all around his very hard friend. I head him gasp and i know i'm doing a great job. Mmm he taste rather good and he's a very good size. I keep downing him over and over and squeeze his thighs. I don't want him to cum, after awhile i stop and stand up. I swear i hear him whimper. "don't worry the fun is just starting" straddling him again i take ahold of his cock and lean my head back as i rub him up and down my very wet slit. He grabs my hands and wraps them both around his neck as he leans me forward and slides two fingers inside me. now it's my turn to gasp! He kisses me hard before i even have time to moan, my hips can't help but move against his fingers "fuck you are so ready" his voice sounds strained. I can tell he's ready too! He picks me up and takes me to my bedroom, and softly drops my down on my bed, climbing over me. "you are insanly sexy, the moment i saw you at my gig i knew i had to touch you" he slides his finger down my body and leans forward "are you on birth control?" He whispers in my ear. Mmm he wants skin on skin too! "i respond by spreading my legs. Luckily he takes my hint and instantly slams inside me. Fuck! "oh my god" is all i can say as he drives into me mercilessly! He works his hips like a god!I wrap my legs around his hips, i'm all sensation as i feel him completely take over. My hands are scratching down his back and my legs try desperately to get him deeper inside me. All to soon i'm ontop, i frown thinking i have to take over. But suprisingly he's still taking charge, grasping my hips and pulling me up then thrusting up deliciously as he meets my downward thrust. Fuck this man has made my body jello under his skilled hands! He sits up and his mouth is on my chest again. I can feel myself going higher. I can tell this will be fast! "fuck me!" With the combination of his mouth and him slamming me down on his cock repeatedly i can barely hold on anymore. He senses it and moans " that's it baby, let go and let me feel your warm cumm all over my cock" not being able to hold on any longer i let go and i fall into waves and waves of pleasure.
He doesn't stop, and i can't come down. Thinking that i can't possibly cum anymore he grasps my hips really hard as he slams into me over and over and he moans my name as i feel him pour into me which just sets me off yet again. I collapse against his chest feeling very well used. God t
