first story

[bacardi8]

hey,

I've just submitted my first story "Sex Club Seven", and would love any feedback/comments:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=24535

hope you find something you like in it...

 

[tigerjen]

yummy story!!

Very good story, especially for a first one! Welcome to
Literotica!

Please check out my erotic poetry/stories

My link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=39113

The link will lead to all the writings I have posted up
here thus far......if for some reason clicking the link doesn't
work just copy and paste it into your browser.....

I look forward to your feedback and votes from you.....and I do
look forward to more stories from you! Good luck!

Tigerjen