FilthyNerd
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- Dec 30, 2018
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Hello everybody.
As the title suggests, I've just recently finished my first story and would love for someone to read it and give me some constructive criticism. Maybe some pointers what to do better. Basically, the same thing that most first time writers are asking for.
As for the story:
It's set in the Shadowrun-Universe, so I would think it fits into the Sci-Fi/Fantasy category. The word-count is at 6379.
The main protagonist is a Shadowrunner who is going to a concert and while there, a cute young girl catches his eye. He hits on her, and after a while they get out of the club and get back to her place to have some fun.
I don't know if any more information is needed. If so, please let me know and I will gladly provide it.
Best regards,
FilthyNerd
As the title suggests, I've just recently finished my first story and would love for someone to read it and give me some constructive criticism. Maybe some pointers what to do better. Basically, the same thing that most first time writers are asking for.
As for the story:
It's set in the Shadowrun-Universe, so I would think it fits into the Sci-Fi/Fantasy category. The word-count is at 6379.
The main protagonist is a Shadowrunner who is going to a concert and while there, a cute young girl catches his eye. He hits on her, and after a while they get out of the club and get back to her place to have some fun.
I don't know if any more information is needed. If so, please let me know and I will gladly provide it.
Best regards,
FilthyNerd
