First story, welcoming ALL comments

[MidKnight_Horizon]

Hi all.

I write as MidKnight_Horizon and I've been a lurker here and on the site for about 4 years now.

I've recently submitted my first story in the ROMANCE section.

The story behind the story is I was asked to write something for that "someone special". The end result was far longer then what I had thought it would be and after a few passes to polish it. . . I ended up with: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=190322

I'd love to have any and all comments. Good, bad, ugly or just plain honest.

Thank you

MidKnight

 

[MidKnight_Horizon]

Thanks to all those that have sent feedback! Good ones I love to hear, and the "bad" ones are good enough to help me out with what needs to be fixed.

The "YOU SUCK" ones I just discard.

And *wave* to the drive-bys.

MidKnight

 

[hogjack]

Congrats on that first story.