First story posting

[MarieWriter]

I've posted my first story on Literotica and I would appreciate some feedback if anyone is interested.

"An Unforeseen Moment" it's still on the new list, it's an Interracial offering. It is based upon a fantasy a friend of mine asked me to write about.

-Marie

 

[sun_sea_sky]

Great story, I commented under the story.

 

[PennLady]

Marie -- Good luck. It would help if you posted a link to your story -- saves people time trying to find it, especially after it's off the new list. Many people include links to their stories in their signature (go to the upper left of the screen for the "User CP" link to futz with that and other things). However, some (like me) do not display sigs (also in the User CP), so putting the link in a post is helpful.

 

[MarieWriter]

First story

Wow!! Thanks!! I never considered that. I can see where it would be very helpful!!

Thank again and here it is...

-Marie

http://www.literotica.com/s/an-unforeseen-moment

 

[arjunindia]

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