First story posted ...

[ameliajax]

Now I'm biting my nails, hoping people read it, hoping they don't ... so hard when you send your babies out into the big bad world!

http://www.literotica.com/s/her-left-arm

 

[JackLuis]

I gave it a 5 for the unique setup.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Now I'm biting my nails, hoping people read it, hoping they don't ... so hard when you send your babies out into the big bad world!

http://www.literotica.com/s/her-left-arm

I read enough of your story to form an idea of your skill set. I say this because the category is low on my list of stuff that floats my boat. So understand that BDSM doesnt do it for me 99.99% of the time. The Marquis de Sade dont thrill me.

So here you are: Your tale is coherent and cohesive and you got the punctuation and spelling under control. The rest is my personal druthers: Get rid of the auxillary verbs and adverbs, they shout to the world, I CUT CORNERS! Rather than say WAS KNEELING say KNELT.

And dont worry about your babies.

 

[LaRascasse]

Now I'm biting my nails, hoping people read it, hoping they don't ... so hard when you send your babies out into the big bad world!

http://www.literotica.com/s/her-left-arm

I read it and my main question is - are you sure it's in the right category?

If it's a roleplay, then I appear to have missed the punchline. Otherwise, it should be in nonhuman/scifi.

 

[ameliajax]

I read it and my main question is - are you sure it's in the right category?

If it's a roleplay, then I appear to have missed the punchline. Otherwise, it should be in nonhuman/scifi.

I was wondering the same thing. Should it? It is a D/s story, but it also takes place in a different sci-fi type world. I wasn't sure which category to put it in. I originally conceived it as a possible graphic novel ... but the sci-fi world takes a back seat for the D/s relationship ...

Should I change categories? Is that possible?