First Story Feedbacks

[exquisit_taste]

Thank you to everyone who took the time to email feedback to me on my first story submitted; Beach Day. The response has been unbelievable and it has encouraged me to write another, Naked Speed Dating, which was submitted today. My editor James says its just shy of a masterpiece, I hope you think so too. Please let me know what you think, and vote, vote, vote!

 

[Omni]

Here is a link to your story, exquisit_taste,


Naked Speed Skating